Date: 01/22/08 07:26 am Title: Chapter 11
Awwww, yeah! Now we're getting to the good part! =)
You do have to admit, though, that Baylee really is quite the charmer - and the kid just turned 5 two months ago. You just KNOW he's gonna be a heartbreaker when he grows up - but his dad WILL make sure he is raised with morals and shows respect, so it's all good.
Great job, guys! Keep up the awesome work. I can't wait to read more.
- Sinara
Author's Response: hehe, the REALLY good art are comming! (cause I already read the next chapter and I'm writing the one after that right now ;) good stuff! and lol at Baylee. Sarah and I talk all the time about how we love Baylee. We're probably having too much fun writing him in this story. Its nice that he's finally starting to get to an age where he does more than look cute and cry. Ya know? Thanks again for the encouragement! We always love it! More to come soon! I promise!
Date: 01/15/08 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
And she was definitely sure he wasn’t the Avenging Angel.
She needs new glasses roflmao.. Great story girls!! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: LMAO I love you, Nijntje! Guess you'll have to stick around and see if she does need a new prescription, huh?
Date: 01/15/08 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
Mac smirked at the look on AJ’s face when he realized that the pills were for menstrual cramps and quickly handed it back like it was infested with cooties. “Ooookay,” he said nervously. “So is that all you need or are we actually gonna have to get some… you know… some of the other things, too?”
That was absolutely hilarious!! I can totally see AJ (or Nick) act like that roflmao!
Date: 01/15/08 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
Uh oh. Now she's suspicious. No matter if she thinks he's it or not right now, she still has that lingering thought. And now the romance is beginning to heat up between them. Can we say, excited?
Author's Response: Definitely excited LOL We love sparks and romance, and there'll be plenty of it coming up soon! And, yes, he's always been on her list because of his physical attributes, but you'll just have to stick around and see how/if she actually figures it out ;)
Date: 01/15/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey girls! Just wanted to let you know I'm reading this story! I really like it so far!
Date: 01/15/08 05:27 am Title: Chapter 10
i bet mac is gonna blow the case by the time the fbi get there cause shell be so convinced that its not him....or, she and brian will start falling in love and he will tell her his secret then she will tell him to stop cause shes fbi and fbi is on the case now hehe. one can imagine right? hehe
Author's Response: Well, that's a very interesting theory you have...but of course I can't tell you what really happens, can I? LOL Stay tuned and we'll see...
Date: 01/15/08 04:24 am Title: Chapter 10
Oooo! Tense! I was happy to see an update so soon after the last chapter. Man, first blood. There's the rep down the drain. So Mac is right but doesn't know it. I can't wait to find out when she does.
Author's Response: Well, there's still a ways to go before Mac finds out about his Avenging ways, but yeah, first blood...dun dun dun! LOL Kelly and I are back on the ball with the updating, so hopefully we'll continue to update regularly! Thanks, Maggie!
Date: 01/08/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh no!! brian left too early! good updates! i feel like i may have missed the other one lol. but its all good now, im caught up :)
Author's Response: aww, yeah we always seem to update like minutes before the rest of the authors on this site. lol. and they have been kind of far and few between so they can be easy to miss. But I'm glad you're all caught up now and still enjoying this story!
Date: 01/08/08 06:19 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Brian is finally starting to open up to Mac, but I have a feeling what he just witnessed is about to make things a lot more uncomfortable again. I think *someone* is jealous.
I feel bad for Mac, though. Everything she thought about the Boys has been totally destroyed. AJ turned out NOT to be her Prince Charming. Brian is no longer the fun-loving prankster of the group. Nick is just a total man-whore. Well, maybe THAT isn't so shocking after all.
Great job guys! Keep up the awesome work. I can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: aww well at the same time she's still having a good time and loves them all. It is kinda sad that AJ wasn't her prince charming after all, but I have an idea why he wasn't/ *giggles like a schoolgirl*
Date: 01/08/08 05:36 am Title: Chapter 9
Oye vey in a half shell! Dammit Brian! Sometimes you just hafta stick around a little logner to see the final result! Holy Hell, NO killing anybody know just 'cause you're pissy an' dunno why! Oye vey!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: lol Lenni, maybe he shouldn't have been spying on her at all. But we should be thinking its a good thing he's upset right? even if he's too dumb to see it yet?
Date: 01/08/08 04:51 am Title: Chapter 9
You love those cliffhangers, don't you? Aaack! Excellent chapter, but PLEASE... don't make us wait too long for the next one. :P Please?
Author's Response: Aww Maggie, what would a story be without a good cliffy at the end of the chapter. (hehe we're evil) thanks for reading!
Date: 01/08/08 04:39 am Title: Chapter 9
good chapter!
Author's Response: merci whoever you are. =D
Date: 01/05/08 06:21 am Title: Chapter 8
this is a really good story, plz update!!!
Date: 12/12/07 06:36 am Title: Chapter 8
I was so happy to see and update. Things are getting interesting. I am anxious to see how Mac is going to find out about Brian. All the stuff with Mac and Baylee is so cute. Good job.
Date: 12/12/07 06:26 am Title: Chapter 8
Aww. So cute! Still feel bad for B-rok! And I kinda wanna smack Mack for deciding upon this uneccesary assignment, but still. Lol.
And Baylee is ADORABLE as always! Hehe.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
