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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/07 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

*shakes head* Oh, Brian....if you only knew why she was REALLY there....She's nosey & intrusive & can't just let a good thing be. Tsk, tsk.

I enjoyed it! Especially Nick, A.J., & Howie - lmao! They crack me up!

And Baylee, like always, is absolutely adorable!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 05:09 am Title: Chapter 6

Roflmao! Oh, Brian! Even when sad you still crack me up!

And Mac - when you find out that Brian's the Avenging Angel, you better NOT put his ass in jail, 'cause then you'd devastate Baylee & fifty gazillino fans who would SO kick your ass! Me being one of them - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Oh, Lenni LOL Don't worry, I think Mac and Brian have a long way to go before one of them ends up in jail. I think you'd be at the front of the line if Mac does put him in jail, though! Thanks for reading =)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 05:01 am Title: Chapter 5

Roflmao! No, Brian - you could NEVER look like Britney out there! God, no! *shudders*

But, they sure are all rather amusing. Though, Mac is still pissing me off royally with wanting to find the Avenging Angel. And I know who it is - hehe. Knew since the beginning - haha.

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: hehe lenni. cause we didn't make it obvious or anything... lol just playin. And don't worry your pretty little head too much about mack. She's only human, which means she won't be able to resist the Littrell charm either.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 04:43 am Title: Chapter 2

Yanno, this is what annoyed me in the new TMNT too - they give the vigilantes shit for helpnig the cops out. I mean, even Batman gets Hell for helping the people of Gotham City out. Yeesh! Can the cops & other people just not sit back & appreciate the extra help? I mean, obviously he's doing nothing wrong - just saving people who need saving - 'cause if he didn't, they'd be dead otherwise! So instead of complaining about the Avenging Angel [or even the Night Watcher in TMNT] they should be awarding him for his active efforts to help keep the city safe! Yeesh!

*grumbles & curses out everyone who hates vigilantes*

~Lenni~

P.S. Yanno, I was sure I was already reading this....but I guess not - lol. 



Author's Response: Lenni! *squeezes Lenni* Thanks for sticking up for Avenging Angel and all the other vigilantes out there, you're their hero LOL Glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Maggie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 04:29 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh that was terrific! I love the interaction with Mac and Baylee, that was such a nice touch.

Again, don't make us wait too long. Please?

Author's Response:

Thanks, Maggie! Glad you liked it! We're diligently working on the next chapter as I write, so hang on!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/07 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 6

lmao, 50 year old mac.....i could see it working out in nicks favor haha

Author's Response: LMAO that man could probably charm a hundred year old woman, too! Personally, I think Kelly and I would rather have Brian, though :)

Reviewer: Moony44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/07 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 6

This chapter made me grin.

 Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it! We enjoy our humor and it definitely adds a little fun into the story, doesn't it? Stay tuned, the next one's on its way!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

lol, loved how nick thinks he really has a say in the new nanny *rolls eyes* this ones for brian nicky, not you!

Author's Response: lol. yes, Nick amuses me greatly too.

Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 04:32 am Title: Chapter 5

Ooooh! Don't leave us hanging too much longer for the next chapter!

Author's Response: aww, we'll try, but don;t worry, Sarah's way better at updating faster than me.

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/07 02:05 am Title: Chapter 4

ooo...maybe she will be the new nanny?

Author's Response: ooo...if i answered that, i'd give everything away LOL

Reviewer: steffi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/20/07 03:38 am Title: Chapter 4

yeah Update! I bet Mac is gonna be the new nanny, I'm right huh? Things are about to get crazy. I don't know I could imagine AJ running around in spandex, he's worn stranger things lol. anyway can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response: Yeah, hmmm...we can't tell you THAT! Haha I could see AJ in everything BUT spandex, but yeah, he does wear weird things LOL We're updating soon!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/07 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

poor brian :(

Author's Response: sorry. Both Sarah and I take great pleasure in torturing Brian emotionally in our fics. I;m afraid with the two of us working together, the man doesn't stand a chance.

Reviewer: steffi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/07 03:08 am Title: Chapter 3

getting very exciting. I really love it. I like the comments from the lady victims too, "charming smile and gorgeous blue eyes" oh and the last chapter when the girl is thinking he's shorter than she expected, lol that cracked me up. Lookin' forward to more, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: well Brian is a shrimp. lol

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/07 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

hm....call it a hunch, but i think i may know who the avenging angel is....very good story!

Author's Response: hmmm, call it a hunch, but you're probably right LOL We're thrilled that you love this story, and there should be an update soon!

Reviewer: steffi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/07 02:35 am Title: Chapter 2

As I am reading this I can see the drawings in the comic book with the captions on the top. I was wondering if you were gonna give him a uniform that's great. Classic superhero story I love it! Keep up the good work ladies. It'd be cool if you could find someone to draw this stuff out.

Author's Response:

The uniform was just a brainstorm I had as I was writing out the chapter, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think it would be pretty cool if we had someone draw it up as we're writing it, but, unfortunately, I don't know who we could enlist for such a project. Either way, Kelly and I are really loving all of your wonderful compliments, since they're making our egos as big as the moon LOL We'll try to have a new chapter up soon!