Date: 10/04/07 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
ay, what a loca.
She needs to leave Avenging Angel alone!
lol
Great story, I'm totally impressed.
Keep it up, can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks so much for enjoying our tale! If Mac didn't want to go after the Avenging Angel, we wouldn't have much of a story, would we? You'll just have to stick around and find out what happens!
Date: 10/02/07 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is Brian "Batman" lol, I love that part.... I gotta better word... Batman!
Author's Response: lol yeah. Not exactly Batman, but we chose him because Bruce Wayne was just a guy too. he didn't have any super powers either.
Date: 10/01/07 01:37 pm Title: Prologue
i would have gladly made it with kevin in there :) but i didnt know if thats what you wanted or not.
Author's Response: We would love to have Kevin in this story, but, because the Boys are planning their tour and will eventually tour, it doesn't seem to fit that Kevin would be there. Maybe he'll show up here and there, anyway! Thanks for all the Kevin love :)
Date: 10/01/07 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa... Girls, I can't wait to see this in action! It's obvious Brian is this "Avenging Angel," but I can't wait to see him actually do it. Keep it up!
Author's Response: hehe I just wanna see him in a cape and tights. ;)
Date: 10/01/07 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
this story is very very good. one slight mistake noticed, i think. you said brian looked into four sets of eyes, but kevin wasnt with the group so shouldnt it be three? unless someone else was there i didnt know about. but still very good :)
Author's Response: Awwww, see. In my heart I still think Kevin is there. *sigh* Thanks though. I already went back and changed it. (even though it hurt to do so.) Thanks hun!
Date: 09/30/07 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a really good continuation from the prologue. The reunion between the fellas was written perfectly...the tension between them all, the emotions, etc... Plus not to much information on Brian's absence was given, which is a good thing because it leaves the reader wanting to find out more. Brian's return wasn't overloaded with a lot of things and I like it that you guys wrote it out that way. good job and I hope to see an update soon! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Wow Ashley, that was a great review. Very constructive, thank you. Glad you liked it. We should be able to keep up with the updates pretty regularly. At least we're hoping! Thanks again!
Date: 09/30/07 11:26 pm Title: Prologue
I'm rather intrigued with the start that you have going to this. There was just enough drama to pull the reader in. I liked it. Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Thanks Ashley! We'll try!
Date: 09/30/07 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah update! I am excited about this story, I can't wait to see where it goes. It feels like a real comic book super hero story. I love it and can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Yay! We were trying for a comic book feel, glad you picked up on that. Hopefully we can keep it up. And we're just as curious to see where thisone goes too so we should be keeping up with the updates. Thanks again Stef!
Date: 09/26/07 06:30 pm Title: Prologue
Ooo I'm excited about this one. I would also like to thank both authors for providing much needed, good Brian fanfics. There was a while where they were few and far between. Keep up the good work and I am interested to see what comes out of this collaboration.
Author's Response: Awwwww! Let me just say that you just made both of our days with this comment because we were really curious to see what comes of us working together and to hear that we weren't the only ones, put a big fat smile on our faces. Thank you so much. Hopefully we won't disappoint!
Date: 09/26/07 05:38 am Title: Prologue
*gasp*
So damn sad!
Great start though. I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Yay! Our first review! Why thank you! It was pretty sad huh? But it wouldn't be a good Brian fic, if he weren't tortured emotionally. haha. Sarah and I both love doing that to him. Thanks for the review hun! We're excited so they're be much more!
