Date: 10/22/07 12:11 am Title: Chapter 4
My favorite parts of this one are the image of Nick waking up and having the messy hair. I love that look and he sports it a lot! hehe. Is he also in athletic shorts...? ;-)
I also love his t-shirt. :D It's so Nick.
Onward to the next chapter!! (haha, I think I just out-dorked myself.)
Author's Response: I would say that you were fine w/ the dorkiness until you said you out dorked yourself.
Date: 10/04/07 12:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Awe, Ariel is just too cute. Oh gosh, Nick dropped her at 6 months old? That's awful, but at least he was trying to take care of her, unlike Tracy! Wait, Nick has hidden depression? Hm, maybe Roxie will be the one to help him sort things out and get well. This was great! Write more soon, please.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. We'll see how he gets better. Hopefully I'll be able to update soon.
Date: 10/03/07 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
What a great update! I love when nick yelled at the lions haha! I'm loving this story alot hope you update soon:]
Author's Response: Yeah I thought that was cute...if I do say so myself...lol. I'm glad you like it. Hopefully I'll be able to update soon. Thanks for reading
Date: 10/03/07 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow! Such an exciting day! Whoot! I love the zoo! Though, the one we usually go to is free - lol.
Aww. Poor Nicky. Why did his fmaily disown him anyway? Because of Ariel?
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. We'll see why Nick's family owned him soon enough. Hopefully I'll be able to update soon.