Date: 10/28/07 06:55 pm Title: Opening Old Wounds
good chapter..update!!
Date: 10/28/07 05:59 pm Title: Opening Old Wounds
Oye vey Brian! You should NOT make poor Baylee promise not to tell! He should've called 9-1-1 the moment he was told to lock his door! Dammit! That poor kid! And Brian should KNOW enough to get help! He CAN have her arrested & Baylee would testify, but I'm sure Leighanne the Bitch would somehow twist it all around to make Brian out to be the bad guy. Oye vey. I swear Brian, SET UPJ A HIDDEN VIDEO CAMERA!!!!! Then haul her ass to JAIL!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thank you! More to come, Lenni. MUCH MORE to come...
Date: 10/28/07 02:48 pm Title: Violated
Great Chapter..
Baylee..what a cuttie!
Date: 10/28/07 10:18 am Title: Opening Old Wounds
OMG! LEIGHANNE IS SUCH A BITCH! He's a four year old! You shouldn't hurt a four year old!!! Omg! I can't believe she hit Brian!!! That's just wow! I hate her so much now! I wanna whoop her booty!!!
Omg, poor Stacia and Brian, maybe that's just how fate plays with them? Like I mean they're not gonna be together right away right? Maybe fate will just bring them together when the time is right! Update as soon as you can! Love the update! =)
Author's Response: We'll see what happens... thank you!
Date: 10/23/07 12:03 am Title: Dark Secrets
wow, really good story..can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 10/21/07 04:24 pm Title: Violated
This story is awesome!! I really love it!I spend my whole afternoon reading it haha..keep the good work up!
Author's Response: Well, thank you!
Date: 10/21/07 06:02 am Title: Burying the Hatchet
Talking is always the first step to working things out. At least it is a start. It's a little refreshing to see how the scene worked out. I liked it! [Ashley]
Date: 10/21/07 05:43 am Title: Bitter Words
Well damn, took me long enough to finally get enough time to sit down and start reading this again. Quite a collection of harsh words Holly tossed in Brian's direction, not that I blame her. For lack of a better word, it's Brian's own "stupidity" that he's never realized it before. You guys have the emotions intertwined throughout this perfectly and the descriptions were good. I could picture it taking place. That's always a plus! Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Date: 10/20/07 09:16 am Title: Dark Secrets
I hate Leighanne with a passion!!! She just had to ruin the moment! I am so glad that Brian is getting a spine now! Talk back to her! She has no right to talk to you like that!!! Wow, when Stacia was having that panic attack it seemed so real! That's so crazy! It was like I can see it happening! and I can't believe Brian took off his wedding ring! First step to Divorce sweety!
Wow she was raped? Wow I mean that's just crazy... I hope they get to find out soon wut happen! And AJ is just so hilarious! LOL I want one of these like Baylee's an item lmao! So glad you update! Update again :)
Date: 10/20/07 08:00 am Title: Dark Secrets
Gah! I love you guys! Yay for Ninja Turtle mentions!!!!!!!!!!!! *delighted shriek* Gosh, I was already hyper thanks to BSB - y'all made it worse! Haha!
"You're the only man that can drool on me. Unfortunately, sometimes you do when you're sleeping--"
And this -> "Baby," AJ whined sharply. "It's just 'cause you're delicious!" <- was just WAY too damned funny! Roflmao!!!!!!
God, I LOVE this story!!!! It's freakin' Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! Eeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was SO happy to see an update!!!!!! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Damn I bet Brian stupidly went home & now Leighanne's beating the shit outta him. PLEASE let me at her!!!!! I know EXACTLY where my fists wanna connect! Lol.
Author's Response: LMAO... I needed this review before going to bed. It was a long week, let me tell you!rnrnOh, must concentrate on the story. I know it gets frustrating, which is why Ana and I love sticking some humor in there to break up the tension. Don't worry... more will come soon! (PS: We get dibs on Leighanne first -- haha)
Date: 10/19/07 12:53 am Title: Crossing the Line
Good chapter. I loved it =D more soon. Maybe Stacia going out with Nick will make Brian wake up.
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. =) Thanks, hun.
Date: 10/15/07 04:33 am Title: Crossing the Line
Oye vey. The lies people gotta tell in order to protect whoever it is they think they're protecting. Brian needs to kick Leighanne's sorry ass to the curb & hook up with Stacia! Hell, let ME kick Leighanne's frigin' ass to the curb!!!!! And if she tries to have me arrested, I'll have HER arrested for child neglect & abusing my poor B-rokster!!!! Dammit!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Len. More will be coming. Much, much more... patience!
Date: 10/15/07 03:08 am Title: Crossing the Line
Wow that shocked me when Brian hit Nick! I mean Nick is rgiht, he's married and he can't do anything about it.. Sadly.. Thank God AJ came! GO AJ!!! YOUR AWESOME! LOL
And the girls who came up to Holly and Staci are so nice! And they're right Staci shud have been Baylee's mother. And I dont know i still feel like she's holding back on something.. Update as soon as you can!
Author's Response: Yeah, but we all know... sometimes Nick likes to rub the guys the wrong way to get a stir out of them... and he ends up getting his ass kicked. AJ is my hero. <3rnrnThank you. Updates are coming!
Date: 10/14/07 10:21 pm Title: Making A Connection
heheheheh I mucho-ly love this story! AHHH lol Seriously. Holly is so adorable though, and so very blunt!
Author's Response: Thanks, Nik. I'm so glad you like it!rnrnYeah... Holly pretty much kicks ass. =)
Date: 10/14/07 10:02 pm Title: Burying the Hatchet
awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! I heart Staci and Brian time!! hehee
Author's Response: It is cute, ain't it?
