Date: 11/18/07 09:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a crazy stories...excellent job with those pictures =)
Date: 10/22/07 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
okay brian, that's creepy as all hell! and i love how you twist this story so much! I love how you didnt end it with just Brian waking up to a dream, but having it recurring and disturbing as it was. Ack! and that last thought? *shudders*
Date: 10/21/07 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Spooky. And just in time for Halloween.
Author's Response: Yup :O) Yay for being spooky!! Creepy and cooky?
Date: 10/21/07 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg wow freaky story mare but wow good
Author's Response: LOL thanks Anita! :O)
Date: 10/21/07 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG.. such a great story Mare. A bit out there, but still.. the last part in which Brian 'confesses' he dreams about killing Leighanne a lot.. amazing! And the last sentence gave me chills..
Author's Response:
LOL thanks. Gotta love creepy Brian :O)
Date: 10/21/07 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I knew Brian was not that perfect little angel he seems to be ;)
b4 I read it I looked at the pictures and was like No way the story well connect these pictures but damn you did it and amazingly it fits :)
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I was a challenge to get them all to fit, especially Brian's i'm glad you think I did a good job. :O)
Date: 10/21/07 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Creepy! Good job at the suspense writing Mare...
Author's Response: Thanks :O)
Date: 10/21/07 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1
What the F? That ending is hella creepy and totally not what I expected to happen. Great job! It was really suspenseful, kinda like 13th step you know? *cough*cough* lol j/k Thanks for the story Mare it was great!
Author's Response: good because one of the challenge points was to have a twist in there lol so that was my twist lol I know...you want another 13th Step chapter lol one day, I promise.
Date: 10/21/07 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1
*gasps* OMG!!!! Qhat is with everyone making Brian the bad guy this month!?!?!?! Lol.
Gah! Get help B-rok!
Great fic!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Probably because the picture I chose makes him kind of look like a bad guy lol
Date: 10/21/07 05:30 am Title: Chapter 1
whoa that was good. you should continue this.
Author's Response: Aww thanks lol i'm not sure I have anything more to say though.
