Date: 10/25/07 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1
very interesting start so far :) I cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!!
Date: 10/24/07 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey nina good job so far the only thing i didnt like too much was the ending it was too abrut and like in the middle of a thought but over all interesting so far
Author's Response: Thanks Anita. I may re-work the ending of the first chapter, if I do, it'll be updated along with the second chapter. Thanks for the feedback!