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Date: 08/26/11 02:46 am Title: Chapter 57 - Getting To Know Me More

awe... yay finally together! nice Job!

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Date: 08/24/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 50 -Sick As My Secrets

oh boy... alyssa is really confused huh? finally Nick is leaving shayla again for good... ok on to the NeXT

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Date: 08/24/11 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 49 - The Hardest Thing

omg... poor Zoey awe! ok this was sad...

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Date: 08/22/11 05:40 am Title: Chapter 43 -Fallen Soldier

poor Ian... yes at first I thought it was Sean

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Date: 08/22/11 05:25 am Title: Chapter 41 - Giving is Half the Fun

well this was one christmas! awe... for alyssa deciding to name the baby Zoe

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Date: 08/18/11 03:46 am Title: Chapter 39 - I Won't be Home for Christmas

oh man shayla is no fool! man this is crazy and messy! but good! ok next chapter...

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Date: 08/16/11 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Family Matters

well Meg is right let's hope Alyssa can have that talk with Nick... hmm this is getting good... on to the next

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Date: 08/16/11 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin

still reading... wow nick has bewitched her! boy what will happen when Sean comes back?!? ok on to the next few chapters

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Date: 08/11/11 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye

OK when I started reading this I was like... ok shayla did not really propose that to alyssa OMG! phew then I got to the April fools thing I was ok good... you scared me there ok on to the next chap.

Author's Response:

I almost forgot about this lame April Fool's joke. I think I meant to take it down afterwards, but never did. I hope you enjoyed the REAL Chapter 19 MUCH better LOL.

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/11 12:18 am Title: Chapter 17 - Downpour

uhm... wow ok bad Shayla! but also bad Alyssa! oh boy trouble is brewing... ok so I am not for the whole I infidelity but I can see why this is happening... ok on to the next.

Author's Response:

Yea... It is definitely a grey area and I am totally against infidelity to. I really tried to acknowledge both sides of the issue the best that I could with this story. There are definitely moments where you want to smack them both for being so selfish, but other times you can't really blame them. I hope you are enjoying!

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call

uhoh... what a dream. haha she finally adimitted outloud! ok uhm on to the next chapter... gotta go see what happens.

Author's Response:

Sorry for not responding to your feedback. This time I was the one witrh internet issues but I should be back now. Haha Yepp... The truth is finally starting to come out!

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Date: 08/05/11 01:41 am Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning

Lord hopefully Nick does not take AJ's advise i dont think alyssa will be comfortable with that! Ok uhm nothing bad in can say evrything is flowing good and very well elaborated.., continuing on

Author's Response:

We'll see about the pictures. They were supposed to come back later on in the story but the idea kind of fizzled out. I am glad to hear that you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Saving Grace

ok sorry for the delay in reviews was really busy with work and i was out of town this weekend but i am reading and i have to say i smell trouble with this friendship between alyssa and Nick. liking it sorry mel for the long time but stay assured i will review More now that i am on reading mode. i have no computer so all this is being done through my iPhone. ok on to the NeXT few chapters

Author's Response:

Oh man! That has to suck trying to read and review an entire story on your iPhone! Thanks for being a trooper though and staying committed.

 

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/11 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1 - Here's to You, Mrs. Robinson

Hi, I got your story for the duel challenge. Even if it is romance it a challenge to me because I rarely read a Nick romance. But so far I have to say you are very detailed in describing to your reader how Alyssa and Nick broke up. How they feel about it and what us happening to them now on there own. I personally think Alyssa still has feelings for Nick and just settled which has me intrigued to see what happens next. I will leave you a review every couple of chapters. I still have a lot to read. I haven't found but a couple of spellings that are nothing major. on to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read my story! I am glad that you understand the back story between them and can sense that Alyssa definitely still has feelings for him. Very interesting that you think she has just settled with Sean which is fairly accurate. I am glad to hear that you are intrigued to read more. I look forward to hearing your thoughts throughout the rest of the story.

Reviewer: marvinemm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/09 04:29 am Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin

I loved it and that first part where Alyssa is talking to Teri reminds me of what my now husband said to me after I got me divorce with my first husband.