Date: 11/18/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye
you are so welcome, hun. you can be sure to get some more when i read on ;)
especially cause i do some writing too and i know how good it is to get some reviews on it ;)
let me say... i still can say, that this is one of the best story i've read so far. i even recommented it to a friend who fell totally in love with it too. She's always telling me that she can't stop reading (i guess she's at chapter 7 now haha).
Author's Response: Yes reviews are VERY motivating! Now if I could just find the time to write... Thanks so much for recommending this story to your friend! I fee honored!
Date: 11/18/08 12:07 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye
muaaaaaaah that was so entertaining. though it would not fit at all... but that was the funny part haha. but nice dram, nick ;)
Author's Response: Yea it would've been very WTF, but this was my April Fool's joke. That was the beauty of it! Thanks for all you reviews! You totally rock hun!
Date: 11/17/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Reality Sets In
That is really a hard situation... i can understand that she left though it was probably not the best to do without talking to nick. nick is right... all he can do is sit and wait... and, that was more than sex definately!!!
Author's Response: Yea it is difficult, but I do agree that I think it was more than sex. You'll just have to see how long that it takes Alyssa to figure that out.
Date: 11/17/08 12:47 am Title: Chapter 17 - Downpour
hooooooooooooot. that's almost anything that i can say. i LOVE that chapter. whow. probably she'll regret it a little but well, don't care about it... this was so HOT.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad that it lived up to your expectations. It's a HUGE compliment!
Date: 11/16/08 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
i knew it from that moment that nick wanted to surprise her at the doctor's that she is faking. BITCH! right decision of nick what he told her. and i LOVE the end. whow!!!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! This sets us up for the next chapter!
Date: 11/16/08 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Joy and Pain
I so knew that this is going to happen... that shayla is going to tell him that she is pregnant. and well... i can just a little unterstand his reaction to it.
Author's Response: Yea especially after Shayla made that comment about forgetting her pills!
Date: 11/16/08 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Wine Me, Dine Me, 69 Me
whow... i LOVE the kissing szene!!! this was just amazing. i want to read more of that!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think that was prolly like the best kissing scene that I ever wrote. Thanks!
Date: 11/16/08 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 57 - Getting To Know Me More
As much as I love the whole 'Happily Ever After' ending here I know it's far from over. :) I can't wait till the next sequel
Author's Response: Thanks Amber! There is a lot still to come in the next story which I hope to start sometime this week and things calm down for me again.
Date: 11/16/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
just read another chapter... and WHOW. the dreams was really intensive. but i guess, alyssa can't deny that there is at least something. otherwise she would not have a dream like that about nick. but well, hard situation... i mean there is the sexual point of you... and she admitted that the sex life is a lot better with nick than with sean... but, does she love nick? or sean? and about the question, if he is thinking the same way... i think he does. i mean, there has to be a reason why he kept her pictures on his laptop ;)
gonna read more tomorrow!
Author's Response: Yea there is definitely still feelings lingering on both of their sides in their self consciousness. Good questons though and you'll find out soon enough as you keep reading.
Date: 11/15/08 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
okay, now it is time for a review. i read the story from the beginning till this chapter and hell yeah, i LOVE LOVE LOVE it. it is actually the first fully english story i've ever read and i was a little bit unsure to do it but... i love it!!! and i so can't wait to read who everything is going on. i have a few conclusions about whats gonna happen. and yay, i can't wait to read the chapter in which nick and alyssa are going to hook up. and yeah, i think there were a few points that showed already that there is still something though they both don't wanna see it that way yet.
anyways... gonna read on probably tomorrow, let's see how far i get then ;)
much love.
Author's Response: Thanks hun! I am so sorry that I am just responding to feedback now. I was out of town for the weekend. I am so glad that you are enjoying this story! You left a bunch of reviews so I'll say more in those.
Date: 11/14/08 12:59 am Title: Author's Notes & Thank You's
Thanks so much for the shout out! I've had fun reading your stories and I can't wait to see how Nick and Alyssa handle their future. It's been fun chatting with you through the reviews lol hopefully my feedback was helpful. Good luck with the next story!
ps. My real is Liane lol
Author's Response: Ha it's nice to finally be properly introduced Liane lol! Your feedback has always been helpful and in many cases entertaining. I'm hoping to try to get this sequel going sometime this week when I have time.
Date: 11/13/08 09:45 pm Title: Author's Notes & Thank You's
Awww!! Mel your the best!! I'm so glad we got chatting!! Can't wait to read When my world is Crashing!
Date: 11/13/08 10:40 am Title: Chapter 57 - Getting To Know Me More
Finally they're together... I loved this story, Mell. Thanks!!
Author's Response: You're welcome Nayla! It's nice to see them finally together, huh?
Date: 11/13/08 07:38 am Title: Author's Notes & Thank You's
***tear**** You are very welcome. I am glad to know that I have had even a fraction of an impact on your writing as you have had in mine. You are the type of writer I hope to one day be.....
I cannot wait to see the first posting of When My World is Crashing....I know it will be amazing.
Good Luck in NC.....I don't know how much a NYer will like it. I lived in Camp LeJuene for a while and I am just a Louisiana girl and it drove me crazy, but hey the people are super friendly.
Once again Congrats on such an amazing story....It is one that will be remember by BSB fan fiction readers for years to come!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you Brandy! You did help me probably without even realizing it by sharing all your experiences in the military throughout your reviews. I hope that WMWIC can live up your expectations.
Thanks for the good luck. I'm not sure how I'll like NC, but I am in a bad place right now financially and careerwise and I think my best bet may be to get out of NY cuz it is riduclous here. No worries though. This is not something I'm doing impulsively. This weekend I am visiting some friends who moved down there and one is a teacher so he is going to like show me his school and stuff.
Date: 11/13/08 02:59 am Title: Author's Notes & Thank You's
You are very welcome, Melly...and you have helped me a ton too. I am so glad we have gotten to know each other through our writing. Not to get too sentimental, but I also see you as a little sister - and I am happy to be there for you...I wish you only the best stuff in life and I know that you can have all of the things you want - you just have to believe in yourself and be CONFIDENT!
I adore ALTOS, you know that...and I think your writing has grown a lot since UMS...it was awesome to watch how respectfully you handled such delicate, controversial situations. There is a touch of class in your writing, even when it is a racey subject matter, not everyone can do that. Like you, Alyssa has shown us that she is a class act, imperfect, but willing to rise the occassion.
You know I think you rule...great job! Be proud, completely this one is a major accomplishment!
Lovies,
Darby
Author's Response:
Awww... Darbs you are gonna make me cry lol. And that is a MAJOR compliment to me about how I handled the issues in ALTOS. That was one of my biggest fears in writing this. Infidelity is a widely controversial topic and I knew that it had to be handled in a dignifed matter to come off the right way throughout this story. And then of course the whole "who's the baby's daddy" thing is like the stuff of bad daytime talk shows. (Why am I thinking Maury? lol) So, again I had to go about that one carefully without making it trashy. I think that no subject is to taboo to write about as long as you go about it with class which I try to do no matter what I'm writing. I think maybe that's whats helped me so much with my sex scenes haha.
Thanks again for everything Darbs!
