Date: 02/19/08 05:04 am Title: New Year....
yay, you updated! awesome update:) i cant believe chiris tried to put the moves on her, what a creep! ok anywayz, but i am not sure if you explained this or not, but i am pretty sure you didnt! but why doesnt aj like kaiden??.. update soon:)
Author's Response: Some people just don't get alone is all. Kayden is the type one either loves or hates lol. Thankies for the review :)
Date: 02/18/08 08:51 pm Title: New Year....
Loved it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 02/18/08 08:40 pm Title: New Year....
Loud? Opinionated? Yepp... Sounds like my family! Lol
Great chapter! I was wondering when we were going to get another update on this. I have to agree with Kayden about New Years. I find it to be a really depressing holiday for some reason. I know it sounds horrible, but I know I usually wind up reflecting on how much I regretted of the previous year. Sounds to me though that Nick and Lis and Kayden and Luke are going to bump into each other at some local bar or something.
And the wole Chris thing now has me wondering... Was he telling the truth? Do him and Kayden still talk? Does Nick know how he tried to come between him and Kayden? Juicy... Can't wait for more to be revealed.
There was just one part where I think you mixed up Luke's name and wrote Sebastian instead. I was like whoa... Am I reading G&G or Rehab? lol
Author's Response: LOL good guess for me then. I hate New Years honestly. As for the Chris thing...well you'll see. And thanks about th ename mix up lmao...oops. I knew I missed something in the edit!
Date: 01/21/08 03:30 am Title: Christmas Miracles
Hmm... Interesting. I like how slowly things are beginning to fall into place about their past together. I'm a little surprised to see that there was actually a relationship once there. I assumed that Kayden's pregnancy was a result of just one night of passion between two friends.
Ha Nick's a jerk in thinking that things went well w/ Lissette. In her defense though it WAS pretty shitty to wait until Christmas Eve to drop the bomb. I mean do you have to ruin the girls Christmas even if she is a bitch? I'm intrigued though to find out what exactly Lissette said to Kayden 8 months ago and WHY she seems to think that Kayden is such a slut. Based on the flashback it sounds as if Kayden was anything but.
Great update! Sorry it took so long for me to review. I've been hella busy!
Author's Response: Wow I'm delayed, I officially suck for not checking LOL. And yeah, I wanted to just show in moments where they seem so at odds, what it was like before it all changed as they grew up and grew together. Nick...is well Nick lmao. It was shitty of him, which to me shows there is a reason Kayden calls him asshole all the time lol. As for Lisette and Kayden...that will come out soon enough. I hinted at the reason why Kayden is called slutty in early chapters, but hehe that's not coming till later. ;) Thankies, and lol I feel your pain, I've been busy too!
Date: 01/18/08 07:09 am Title: Christmas Miracles
Hope they get back to good terms. Behind all that hatred it lies a lot of love for one another. Hopefuly they'll see it soon. Take care!
Author's Response: Hehe, interesting take on it, thankies for the review!
Date: 01/18/08 04:04 am Title: Christmas Miracles
Loved it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks for the review
Date: 01/18/08 01:38 am Title: Christmas Miracles
Wow I love it and I can't wait to read more.. Great Job and I will be back lol
Author's Response: Awww thank you! Can't wait to see you come back lol
Date: 01/17/08 06:29 pm Title: Christmas Miracles
loved the update.. the witch needs to go already, she is gettin on my last nerve.. update soon
Author's Response: lol she may go eventually...maybe. :) Thanks for the review.
Date: 01/15/08 12:40 am Title: Insane Ideas and Unwanted Thoughts
Awesome story! You still updating? cos id love to read more!
Author's Response: awww thank you! Yes I'm still updating, I have the next chapter in the works between work (and soon college yet again) so stay tuned hehe.
Date: 01/05/08 01:48 am Title: Insane Ideas and Unwanted Thoughts
Hey! LOL I'll have you know I actually did my Christmas shopping in the beginnig of December this year! lol j/k
Ooh... Very interesting chapter. I've definitely missed this story. Aww... so there were romantic feelings between them at least at one point along the line. Could it be that those feelings never qute went away?
And asking Kayden to move into his guest house was REALLY sweet of Nick, but that's not exactly something that he can hide from Lisette too easily. She's going to find out soon, huh? I can't wait to see her reaction!
Author's Response: lol I had mine done like Novemberish...I'm a dork haha. It makes me fuzzy that you actually miss the story hehe. As for romantic feelings, yes they were once there, as for now, well...you'll see cause I'm mean lol. I love your support for this though *squishy hug*
Date: 01/04/08 04:08 am Title: Insane Ideas and Unwanted Thoughts
awesome update.. i personally think that he like her still, and she him.. he really needs to get rid of his so called girlfriend.. she is gonna find out anyways and dump his butt..lol! update soon
Author's Response: Thankies! As for how they feel about each other...you'll see if you're right or not hehe. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 12/20/07 10:49 pm Title: Conversations
lovin this story keep up the good work cant wait for the next update
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you're loving it
Date: 12/15/07 03:49 pm Title: Conversations
Hmm... Well I think the guys took the news quite well considering, but something tells me that when Lissette does find out it won't at all be pretty.
And whoo! Go Kayden! Scoring some digits even though she resembles a whale lol I'm curious to see if she'll call this Luke guy. For some reason that bring on the candy canes bitch line cracked me up!
I'm glad finals are done for you. I'm almost done so then I can finally work on my Chapter 6! I hate not being able to write. By the way are you ever on AIM? I added you to my b-list, but haven't caught you yet.
Author's Response: LOL I think the guys reacted as well as I think they could. They can't change it, they see he's at least stepping up, so they're stepping back. And I felt Kayden from the picture I have of her, is still cute enough to score a guy hehe. As for the candy canes line...lmao I've been around guys too much, I so was thinking perverted when I wrote that. Lately I'm not online as much but I'm gonna catch you while you're on sooner or later lol.
Date: 12/15/07 07:39 am Title: Homecoming
WoW. They're mad people, lol. A lot of cursing going on. Good Chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah lol I try to write how they talk since it's first person, hence all the cursing. Thanks for the review.
Date: 12/15/07 07:13 am Title: Prologue
I detect a lot of hate, lol. And you say they're best friends? haha Good Prologue
Author's Response: They WERE best friends lol, and thankies :)