Date: 11/21/07 08:34 pm Title: Homecoming
ooo I love it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it :)
Date: 11/21/07 07:23 pm Title: Homecoming
Wonderful chapter! I cant wait to read some more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy to see you're liking it hehe.
Date: 11/21/07 04:50 pm Title: Homecoming
Oooh I kinda had a feeling that was going to happen! I know firsthand how annoying it is to have to set up a story cuz that's kind of what I'm going through right now, but it seems like towards the end you started getting into the main conflict. Kayden seems like quite the firecracker and Nick? LOL Well, he sounds like Nick lol Sort of like how you portray him in JAD but prolly more of an asshole lol
Author's Response: Yeah, I know your pain, it was more to set up Kayden and the premise of the fic. Which I love her character but I hated I couldn't get into Nick more lol. Kayden is very different from Cally so it's a nice change up. And Nick? Yeah I'm definitely dipping into bigger asshole territory here lol, but trying to keep to how I think he is. Can't always play him off nice hehe.
Date: 11/21/07 05:59 am Title: Prologue
This is a lovely start :) I cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: awww thank you :)
Date: 11/21/07 04:10 am Title: Prologue
Hmm sounds intriguing, very interested to know what happens!
I'm gonna take a very rough guess and say they got drunk one night and had sex and now she's pregnant (might explain her raging about him lol)
Author's Response: hehe yay you like it.rnrnAs for your guess...you'll see :)
Date: 11/21/07 03:20 am Title: Prologue
oh im intriged and waitin for a new chapter
Author's Response: hehe thanks for reading
Date: 11/20/07 10:28 pm Title: Prologue
like it so far, update soon please
Author's Response: Working on it, thanks for the review :)
Date: 11/20/07 10:06 pm Title: Prologue
love it so far... update soon
Author's Response: Thanks :)
