Date: 01/15/08 01:26 am Title: In Pieces
Awwwww! I Love Nick and Bryna!!!! Reading this made me sooooooo excited for this story! I think its' off to a great start and even though it's in 3rd person, it's still from Nick's perspective so I think it would be ok if you leave it this way. I think changing it to first person might change the whole feel of the story and I am just too in love with this series to want it different. Does that make sense? I think it would be too different from the first story if you change it and I think it sounds wonderful the way it is! (Of course if you do change it, I'm sure I will still be in love with it!)
Date: 01/01/08 07:14 pm Title: In Pieces
awe! more soon! I didn't expect anything more from the original story, but what a good surprise for the new year!
Author's Response: Honestly, I didn't expect more, either, but I did feel bad for Bryna and Nick. They do have a pretty great story, so I thought I'd flesh it out in a story that's not quite a sequel because it takes place between the last chapter and the epilogue of Once Upon a Time. Anyway, I'm glad you're excited for it because I definitely am! Thanks!
