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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 01:00 pm Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

ROTFLOL.....This is the best Nick and AJ dialogue I have ever read. Had to laugh at when Nick was talking about the paparazzi loving him cause of his ass. The hat condom thing made me giggle a bit, but I just loved everything. Awesome.

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 05:04 am Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

lol you did a great job with this

Author's Response: hehe thanks :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 08:20 am Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

Roflmao!!!!! They're both NUTS!!!!! Haha! Hope that cleared that up for them - lol.

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: lmao yes they are, but then they'll argue about who's crazier ;) glad you liked it hehe

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 04:34 am Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

Oh my god! This is funny, I love imagining those going at it, and usually cause one is weird and the other is fat! I really liked the ending...you had me laughing all by myslef, my husband was looking at me kinda weird. LOL

Great job!



Author's Response: LOL good to hear I'm not the only one who thought this was funny lol. Cause yeah, I know what I may giggle at as a writer others won't and just yeah haha. I'm happy to hear you liked it. Thankies!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 09:46 pm Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

haha it was very funny, Great!

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 08:30 pm Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

I enjoyed this. And just reading it makes me imagine how hard it would be to write something in just completely dialogue without any detail to back it up. I am a detail junkie, so yeah. But you pulled it off well. Captured the moment good with just the dialogue and it was funny. Again, good job! [Ashley]

Author's Response: Man I rely a lot on thought processes and details to tell a story, so man this wasn't easy lol. But I was inspired. I'm glad you liked and and thankies hehehe.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 06:54 pm Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

LOL nicely done. :)

Author's Response: Thankies :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 06:53 pm Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

LMFAO!!! That was freakin hilarious! I love funny dialogue with AJ and Nick! That was great =)

Author's Response: hehe thankies! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: TannahJordan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 05:01 pm Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

haha! that was funny. i enjoyed that.

Reviewer: TannahJordan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 05:00 pm Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

haha! that was funny.

Author's Response: glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 12:34 pm Title: Coffee and Cigarettes

Hehe, this was really cute Rose!! I love it when people make AJ and Nick converse, it's so fun to read and there's different ways you can portray these two. Good job, thanks to you I might just give this challenge a try (and that would be my first since I've been here.) :)

Author's Response: Thankies! I love writing AJ and Nick, cause it can never be too random lol. You should try it, but yeah, dialogue only is definitely harder than it looks lol.