Date: 03/22/14 02:28 am Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
Ooh, this is so dark and mysterious, I like it. Great use of imagery in the supernatural stuff that Brian is seeing. I can only wonder if the other three guys got themselves in danger and if Brian were able to save them in time.
Date: 04/15/08 09:15 am Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
I'm intrigued with what you have written so far. A bit creepy, but entertaining at the same time. Please update soon!
Date: 04/14/08 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
nooo not the psych ward!!! Loved the update. Update soon!!!
Date: 04/14/08 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow. This is an amazing story so far. Extremely sad though. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 04/14/08 05:18 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
OMG...this is very interesting already! Can't wait to see where you go with this...
Date: 04/14/08 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG...i'm addicted. I can't wait to see where you go with this story!!!
Date: 04/14/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
cool. update. this story is creepy but I like it. looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Date: 04/14/08 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
poor brian. please dont let the other guys die too, i dont think brian, or i, could take it!
Date: 03/19/08 01:32 am Title: Chapter 4
noo! oh my gosh you have got to update like now!!! I have to know more!
Date: 01/08/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
oye vey......just, dont let the others die, okay?
and vaffle s finlly shutting down huh....that site did start to bug me when it wouldnt let me log in haha.
Date: 01/07/08 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is an interesting story. I've read it on another site but I have always been anxious to see what happens after all this and what is really going on with Brian. Hope to see another update soon.
Date: 01/07/08 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
*cries* this is so sad! but so good! am i going crazy or did i read the first two chapters somewhere else?
