Date: 02/06/08 05:09 am Title: Chapter 10
What a pimp! Of course Nick just HAS to drop the room number you know just in case... I'm liking this story, but ugh I just wanna smack the young Ashleigh in the flashbacks for being so stupid and naive! In a way I can't feel sorry for her because she was so out of touch with reality thinking after one night of sex, Nick is going to marry her. It's kind of like what can you expect? But then she was so young... I'm hoping that the Ashleigh of the present is a lot stronger and not gong to fall for Nick so easily this time. Nice work!
Author's Response: lmao @ calling Nick a pimp, that's awesome. Yeah, Ashleigh's really dumb in the past. But hey, if I slept with Nick Carter I'd be hoping for round two as well :P I'm glad you're liking it, quite honestly this was just a little idea that popped into my head one day while walking to school and it's very quickly becoming something that I'm having a lot of fun writing. Hopefully she doesn't make the same mistakes again, but it seems like Nick of the present is a little more caring and not as shallow as hos former self. But we shall see!! I still have yet to decide where I'm going to take this as far as the ending goes.... I guess I'll kind of have to put it into the characters hands at this point. Wow I rambled a lot.. thanks so much for the review! Hopefully I won't completely botch the ending!
Date: 02/06/08 12:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh wow this was a great update, can't wait for more, maybe she will show up at his hotel.
Author's Response: Thanks. Maybe she will ;)
Date: 02/05/08 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm loving it! I think it was good for Ashleigh to get all that out and really tell Nick why she was hurt or what not. Because I think he honestly thought she was just some groupie that wouldn't care in the long run.
Well done! Can't wait to read more :]
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're liking it :) I think Nick's matured a little in between now and when he and Ashleigh first met. His ideals have changed a little, I think. Thanks again!!
Date: 02/05/08 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great job hun! I laughed at Ashleigh's fantasy earlier, it was so cheesey but yet so funny, cause lord knows we're all guilty of daydreaming the same exact thing! lol Man, I wish Nick would seek me out after a concert. I'd die, but then to end up in the shower with him? Mmm, yummy! Loved it! Lookin' forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks love! I re-wrote the fantasy a few times before I was happy with it.. I needed to make it as cheesy as possible hehe. The next chapter is almost done, I just need to read it over. I'd have to agree, if Nick came looking for me after a concert I'd probably die of shock before he got to me! Thanks again for the review :D
Date: 02/05/08 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
awesome update, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 02/05/08 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
i sooooo loved it such a great job cant wait for more soooo good.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I'm writing the next chapter right now :o)
Date: 02/05/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow! I just got all caught up with this story and I absolutely love it! It's very well written and the characters are so realistic! You're doing a great job.
I love the way you allow Ashleigh's character to have flaws. It really makes it all so much more realistic. And how you make Nick flawed and real by how he treats his "groupies".
Overall, it's really wonderful! I can't wait to read more :].
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was really worried before the last chapter I posted, thinking it was too unrealistic and not believable. It makes me happy to know that you think I'm pulling it off well. Thanks again :) I'll try to update sometime today or tomorrow!
Date: 02/05/08 07:34 am Title: Chapter 8
ooooooooo so good cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/04/08 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
You're really good at dialogue. I've always struggled with that. It may seem easy but it's actually not... you got it to flow really well! Loved this chapter. Really want to know what happened between Ashleigh and Nick, especially since he doesn't seem to know what he did wrong. Looking forward to seeing their dinner hehe Great job love!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought the dialogue was good, I felt like it was a little forced, so I'm glad it came off well. I'm really excited to write their dinner! I'm re-working this a little bit, the ending I had originally planned doesn't seem like it's going to work anymore. My characters are pulling the story in a different direction.. so we'll see what happens, at this point I'm not even sure hehe. Thanks for your review Dani :) I always look forward to them! I'll try to update as soon as I have some time.
Date: 02/04/08 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great update, can't wait to see what happens next. please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Hopefully I'll have some time to write tonight!
Date: 02/04/08 04:13 am Title: Chapter 7
I really like this story so far, you have to update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to update as soon as I can!
Date: 02/03/08 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
This story is quickly becoming one of my fav. stories! It's very well written and I guess on some level is deals with something every fan has dreamed about!!
Hope to see many updates very soon - maybe a bit longer chapters?
Author's Response: Aw thank you :) I will try for longer chapters, it's something that I've always had issues with. It's a chore to churn out chapters this long hehe. But I will try! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/03/08 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh Nick, he wouldn't be so lonely if he didn't go around sleeping with random women! I say he should give Ashleigh a chance. Loved her and Joey's conversation at the end. It was so cute... a conversation any girl would have with a friend if that were to happen. I'm happy she left Nick alone.. wasn't expecting that, and he obviously wasn't either lol Anyway love, great chapter! I really like how you switch off from past and present. It's a really neat way of writing things. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the past/present switching, at first I was kind of worried it would be confusing but it seems like it's working so...yay! lol. Although the past is becoming quite a bit more fun to write hehe. He should totally give Ashleigh a chance! I fully support this but we shall see.. Thanks for the awesome review hun :) I'll try to have a new chapter soon!
Date: 02/03/08 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 7
another great chapter cant wait for more,
Author's Response: Thanks! =)
Date: 02/03/08 07:13 am Title: Chapter 6
soooo good cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
