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Reviewer: jennifer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/08 02:50 am Title: Chapter 24

great story! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks jennifer!! Glad you like it :D

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/08 02:33 am Title: Chapter 24

Yeah awesome update, their gonna be togerther now. glad she broke up with matt. update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad she broke up with Matt too :) I'll try to post the next chapter soon

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/08 01:53 am Title: Chapter 23

super job, update soon, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Kim! A new update will be along shortly :)

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/08 01:35 am Title: Chapter 23

think much of it woman. theres a new body laying where you used to. blah. her naiveness makes me sad. cant wait for more! if i was joey i would have ripped ashleigh a new one and told her to be realistic!

Author's Response: Haha, Ashleigh is super naive isn't she? I kind of wanted to make Joey snap at her, but I couldn't bring myself to write it, poor Ashleigh was depressed enough as it is. Thanks for the review mary :)

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/08 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

Awww Ashleigh. Poor girl. She really put her heart into that relationship didn't she? It was her first love, so of course it was all new to her. I can't blame her for being so heartbroken. I can't believe Nick would do something like that, but I'm glad he's making up for it now, even if it is, what, 8 years later? Lovely chapter! You did fabulous, as usual :)

Author's Response: Thanks! It's so hard to write these flashback chapters, and they're kind of boring now because we already know how this part turns out.. but I just feel awful for Ashleigh.. and I hate putting her through this, but it must be so. It all worked out quite some time later, so that makes me feel a little better about torturing the poor girl now, heh. I was going to put some more jerkish Nick in this chapter, but I think I've written enough of that. Another update will be up soon! Thanks for reading Dani!!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/08 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 23

such a great job cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! More will be up shortly :)

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/08 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 22

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES! Finally! They're so damn cute, it's disgusting. Nick is to die for in this story. I love how you portray him. He's just incredibly adorable and sweet (present Nick that is). I love this story to pieces. I can't wait to see what happens next! But I know I won't have to wait too long, cause you're an updating machine lol

Author's Response: I love the responses to this chapter hehe. I had a stupid grin on my face the whole time I was writing it. I love present day Nick, he's so much more fun to write. Past Nick is just...painful. Thanks a bunch darlin! You're right about not having to wait too long, because I'm halfway done chapter 23 :D

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/08 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 22

Can't wait for the next update, gonna be interesting to see how matt reacts to her news. hopefully all will be ok for her and nick. update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully things go well for them, they've gone through enough drama already :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/08 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 22

yay yay i soooo loved it such a great job. cant wait for more.

Author's Response: I'll try to post more ASAP. Thanks for being such an awesome reader blueleeryan :D

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/08 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 21

oh sooooo good. but poor asheigh.



Author's Response: Thanks! Poor Ashleigh indeed :(

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/08 10:25 am Title: Chapter 22

yessss! finally she gave in. but now comes the hard part. facing everyone. and she cant stay there if they want to be together but she cant give up her store! ohhh the dilemma! cant wait for more! chapter was really well done!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) I'm not sure she and Nick realize how hard this long distance thing is going to be. Thanks for always reading and reviewing mary! You rock!

Reviewer: marie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/08 05:29 am Title: Prologue

this is really good so far! i am going to keep reading and i will review at the end when i finish! later

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you're liking it so far

Reviewer: Jamanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/18/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 21

Ahh, so I'm assuming this is the end of Ashleigh and Nick from the past. Nick probably will never call her, so sad for Ashleigh. Poor thing will probably be depresed for days, weeks, years?

Ah, but these last three chapters have been great! I'm really excited to see what's going to happen next, oh wait, FLORIDA! Please, please, please, I'm on my hands and knees begging you to post more like...as soon as possible, hehe. I want to read more really, really bad. I'm hooooooked. :D

Author's Response: Unfortunately Ashleigh from the past still has a multitude of whining to do hehe. Indeed, Florida does come next! I'm trying to write as fast as possible, I'm aiming for an update tonight but we'll see how it goes. I've built up this chapter so much in my head, that writing it perfectly is going to take me some time. I'm glad you're liking it though! Thanks for your review, you're a totally awesome reader Jamanda :D

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/18/08 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 21

Another awesome update,
can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more soon :D

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/08 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 21

Good lord woman, you're popping these chapters out left and right. Lovely update as usual. I really can't believe that after 2 months, Nick didn't develop ANY feelings for her. What a butthead. He's gotta know the affect he had on her. Oy. OH! And I loved how you put the Pepsi Center in this. It made me smile!! Keep 'em coming buddy.

Author's Response: I totally did that for you actually. I saw that one of the last dates for the original B&B was Denver and I thought awww Dani, Dee and Purpura. So, you guys were my inspiration for that hehe. And yes, past Nick really sucks. I'm on such an updating spree, I love it! Thank goodness for long weekends woo! Thanks for reading and reviewing :D