Date: 04/15/08 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I am intrigued! lol. on to the next chap!
Date: 02/29/08 01:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Wait did I see death in the warnings? Don't kill the Brian!! lol
Date: 02/16/08 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww poor Brian I felt like that sometimes, but luckily I never got bullied. At least one person talks to him. Good chapter.
Date: 02/09/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww i feel bad for brian =( but its a good story
Date: 01/30/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
awesome chapter! update soon!
Date: 01/30/08 03:43 am Title: Chapter 1
i love this story, well what you have so far. you should write more soon.
Date: 01/25/08 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel so bad for him. I've gone through stuff like that (maybe not people throwing food at me, but just as bad). Boys chasing me around a classroom with huge scissors, yelling insults, having to eat by myself every single day for a year... Good thing that's over.
Author's Response: Gosh, I know that feeling too. I was in the same position pretty much up until sophomore year of HS. It was awful.
Date: 01/25/08 09:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, talk about being off to a depressing start. You have a lot of deep emotions working in this so far and I like the way you explain them. Kinda makes me wish you were writing this in first person POV, would make it so much more personable and effective, but it also works very well the way you are writing it, so keep up the good work and please update soon. Are we ever going to see an update for NSB? [Ashley]
Author's Response: Haha...yeah, NSB is on the way. In a bit of a rut though. It sucks....but Im working through it one sentence at a time. Lets hope you see an update by the end of the month! Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 01/25/08 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1
poor brian! are nick and aj going to be in this too or just howie brian and kevin? love it so far!
Author's Response: yeah, NIck and AJ will be in this too. Nick is gonna play the part of a jock football player who gives Brian the hardest time and AJ is going to play his 'cool' younger brother, who acts as if he doesnt exist because he is embarassed they are related. Thanks for the feedback
Date: 01/25/08 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1
wow that chapter was amazing. great job with this ashley. once again amazing. keep up the great work