Date: 10/04/08 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
i really like this story it has alot of real life situations and everything in it.. keeps me interested, hope you update sooooon!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) My goal was to incorporate real life situations from high school that a lot of kids do go though. I want to hav the next chapter done by the end of the weekend. Thanks again :)
Date: 10/02/08 01:03 am Title: Chapter 5
nice job on that chapter! its about damn time. hope to see an update this year.
Date: 10/01/08 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I want to have another chapter up within a week or two. Hopefully I have time enough off work to do that :) Thanks so much!
Date: 10/01/08 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
O my freaking Lord! I can't believe Alex beat him THAT bad...just for telling about them being brothers! *smacks Alex* There! How do you like it, you big meanie head! I bet if Brian really tried to stand up, for himself, he'd find that he could beat Alex senseless!
I am really glad Howie helped out, the way he did...I kind of got a little worried there, when he "violently" swung the door open. Then again, how could you turn on poor Brian? I am also really please at Heather's reaction...Howie picked himself a good woman, and I approve!
So, now what's going to happen, with Heather leaving? Is Howie gonna try to get Brian to talk more? What about those wounds? How is Brian going to get his stuff from home? How long will Howie let him stay? What's he going to do? Where's he going to go? Will the taunting, at school, get worse? What about this blind date? Are they going to give him time to heal, first? Or will he still be kinda beat up? Is Heather going to make all the arrangements so Rachel and Brian just have to show up? Will Brian actually go, or will he not go because he thinks she won't show up? How is he even going to react to the idea? How much coaxing is it going to take to get him to go?
Oh my dear God, in heaven...you HAVE to update as soon as you possibly can! You know I'll bug ya, until you do! Please? Please? Pretty please?
Author's Response:
Damn...long-winded much? haha. You know I lub ya! I agree...if Brian tried, he probably could knock Alex to the floor and put him in his place. The thing is, poor Brian hasnt the confidence to do so. As for Howie violently swinging open the door..we all know he is a softie. lol. He was just frustrated that he hadnt seen Heather in weeks, was about to have sex, and got interrupted. He would never hurt Brian.
Now to answer your questions...because thre are a lot of them...haha.
1. We wont see what happens much after Heather leaves, but more of a flashback to the conversation.
2. The wounds will heal with time...mostly just bruising and cuts that need a bandaid
3........... you know what....why am I telling you the answers to these when I can just say...
YOU'LL HAVE TO WAIT AND FIND OUT!!!! LMAO.
I'll try to update soon...I know you'll be my cheerleader for this one! :) Thanks a ton! I lub ya! *huggies*
Date: 10/01/08 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
*curses wildly* How DARE people treat Brian like that!!!!!! I'd TOTALLY be his friend!!!!! Fuck them 'cool' people!!!!! To me 'cool' was the ones who drank, smoked, did drugs, & had sex - nothing I wanted to be apart of. Being 'cool' isn't all that it's cracked up to be. I hope somebody kicks Alex's ass REAL good for being such a fucking prick!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Lets all kick Alex's ass!!!! Cool are usually the ones into drugs and crap...I was glad not to be 'cool' in school. lol. Lets just say though that Brian doesnt have an easier time any time soon. :( Thanks for the feedback! *hugs*
Date: 10/01/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
ooooh I've been waiting for an update! More soon!!!
Author's Response: Awww! Thanks. I hope to have another update soon! I have the next chapter outlined. :)
