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Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/08 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

O my freaking Lord! I can't believe Alex beat him THAT bad...just for telling about them being brothers! *smacks Alex* There! How do you like it, you big meanie head! I bet if Brian really tried to stand up, for himself, he'd find that he could beat Alex senseless!

I am really glad Howie helped out, the way he did...I kind of got a little worried there, when he "violently" swung the door open. Then again, how could you turn on poor Brian? I am also really please at Heather's reaction...Howie picked himself a good woman, and I approve!

So, now what's going to happen, with Heather leaving? Is Howie gonna try to get Brian to talk more? What about those wounds? How is Brian going to get his stuff from home? How long will Howie let him stay? What's he going to do? Where's he going to go? Will the taunting, at school, get worse? What about this blind date? Are they going to give him time to heal, first? Or will he still be kinda beat up? Is Heather going to make all the arrangements so Rachel and Brian just have to show up? Will Brian actually go, or will he not go because he thinks she won't show up? How is he even going to react to the idea? How much coaxing is it going to take to get him to go?

Oh my dear God, in heaven...you HAVE to update as soon as you possibly can! You know I'll bug ya, until you do! Please? Please? Pretty please?

Author's Response:

Damn...long-winded much? haha. You know I lub ya! I agree...if Brian tried, he probably could knock Alex to the floor and put him in his place. The thing is, poor Brian hasnt the confidence to do so. As for Howie violently swinging open the door..we all know he is a softie. lol. He was just frustrated that he hadnt seen Heather in weeks, was about to have sex, and got interrupted. He would never hurt Brian.

 Now to answer your questions...because thre are a lot of them...haha.

1. We wont see what happens much  after Heather leaves, but more of a flashback to the conversation. 

2. The wounds will heal with time...mostly just bruising and cuts that need a bandaid 

3........... you know what....why am I telling you the answers to these when I can just say...

 YOU'LL HAVE TO WAIT AND FIND OUT!!!! LMAO.

I'll try to update soon...I know you'll be my cheerleader for this one! :) Thanks a ton! I lub ya! *huggies*

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/08 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

*curses wildly* How DARE people treat Brian like that!!!!!! I'd TOTALLY be his friend!!!!! Fuck them 'cool' people!!!!! To me 'cool' was the ones who drank, smoked, did drugs, & had sex - nothing I wanted to be apart of. Being 'cool' isn't all that it's cracked up to be. I hope somebody kicks Alex's ass REAL good for being such a fucking prick!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Lets all kick Alex's ass!!!! Cool are usually the ones into drugs and crap...I was glad not to be 'cool' in  school. lol. Lets just say though that Brian doesnt have an easier time any time soon. :( Thanks for the feedback! *hugs*

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

ooooh I've been waiting for an update!  More soon!!!

Author's Response: Awww! Thanks. I hope to have another update soon! I have the next chapter outlined. :)

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/08 02:54 am Title: Chapter Four

urm...UPDATE< UPDATE UPDATE! What? you haven't updated yet? *taps foot impatiently* come ooooooooon! grrr...I mean NOW missy!

lol *grin*

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/08 02:45 am Title: Chapter Three

*GASP* HOAWRD! OOOOOOO...he better not!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/08 02:38 am Title: Chapter Two

*sniffles* I feel so bad for Brian! Oo! Ooo! Does he want a girl? I would volunteer, lol! ;-) Great story so far *skips off to next chapter, completely forgetting about the chapter I was writting for Prot.*

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/08 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1

I am intrigued! lol. on to the next chap!

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter Four

awesome chapter1 its about time brian had someone to stand up for him! i have a feeling the worst is about to come!

Reviewer: Tscarpulla21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/08 03:06 am Title: Chapter Four

Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/08 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Four

High school is SUCH a fun place. Howard is completely right. No one remembers what clique you were in when you meet up five years later. Everyone is actually strangely nice. Alex is being an ass. I hope things get better for Brian!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/08 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Four

awe!  more soon!

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/08 02:42 am Title: Chapter Three

awesome chapter!!! poor bri bri sounds like he is about to enter hell. update soon!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/29/08 04:27 am Title: Chapter Three

wow...nice cliffhanger!  can't wait for more!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/29/08 01:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Wait did I see death in the warnings? Don't kill the Brian!! lol

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/08 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Three

geeze howie! keep yer mouth shut!

Author's Response: I know, right! He needs to keep his mouth shut to save Brian! Thanks!!!