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Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/08 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Two

awe!  pooro Bri!  more soon!

Author's Response: Im working on it! :) Should see a chapter up within a week! Thanks!!!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/08 05:01 am Title: Chapter Two

yay howie! boo aj! sorta yay kevy!...er...mr richardson haha. is nick gonna fit into this? i cant remember if i asked that before haha.

Author's Response: Nick will fit into this...he's going to play a jock football player as well as one of Brian's biggest bullies...and AJ's best friend, likely. :o)

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/08 04:55 am Title: Chapter Two

Howie always a kind man. I hope that he helps him out, I dont' think I would take that kind of abuse from ANYONE, but then again you never know. I like this story those things are real issues!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Unfortunately, there are plenty of kids out there that get bullied like this every single day. There's a lot more to come....hopefully another chapter by the end of the week

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/08 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww poor Brian I felt like that sometimes, but luckily I never got bullied. At least one person talks to him. Good chapter.

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/08 04:23 am Title: Chapter Two

I know for sure (at least I think I do) that we are in for one emotional ride. It is relieving however to see Howie stepping up to try to be Brian's friend, despite the fact that Brian is so hesitant about it. I don't blame Brian for being so skeptical over everything. He's never been given the chance to experience situations that would allow him to believe otherwise. Good update. Keep up the good work and update this soon! Same with NSB! *hint hint* [Ashley]

Author's Response: Yes, it likely will be an emotional story IF I get the emotions off as I hope to. Not so Bad likely coming later on this weekend. You should check out the short story I did...for the February challenge *hint hint* lol.  Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/08 04:18 am Title: Chapter Two

aww thats cool he finally has a friend. maybe his luck will make a change for the good but than again it could be for the very worsed. update again this week!

Author's Response: We shall see! I'll be working on Chapter 3 soon...soooo....we'll see when it gets out there.

Reviewer: Bshorty13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww i feel bad for brian =( but its a good story

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

awesome chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 03:43 am Title: Chapter 1

i love this story, well what you have so far. you should write more soon.

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/25/08 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

I feel so bad for him. I've gone through stuff like that (maybe not people throwing food at me, but just as bad). Boys chasing me around a classroom with huge scissors, yelling insults, having to eat by myself every single day for a year... Good thing that's over.

Author's Response: Gosh, I know that feeling too. I was in the same position pretty much up until sophomore year of HS. It was awful.

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/08 09:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, talk about being off to a depressing start. You have a lot of deep emotions working in this so far and I like the way you explain them. Kinda makes me wish you were writing this in first person POV, would make it so much more personable and effective, but it also works very well the way you are writing it, so keep up the good work and please update soon. Are we ever going to see an update for NSB? [Ashley]

Author's Response: Haha...yeah, NSB is on the way. In a bit of a rut though. It sucks....but Im working through it one sentence at a time. Lets hope you see an update by the end of the month! Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/08 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1

poor brian! are nick and aj going to be in this too or just howie brian and kevin? love it so far!

Author's Response: yeah, NIck and AJ will be in this too. Nick is gonna play the part of a jock football player who gives Brian the hardest time and AJ is going to play his 'cool' younger brother, who acts as if he doesnt exist because he is embarassed they are related. Thanks for the feedback

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/08 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1

wow that chapter was amazing. great job with this ashley. once again amazing. keep up the great work