Date: 12/10/08 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 36
whow... whow... whow... finally he told her. i could feel how hard it was when she rejected him first. and awwwww i love the scene when she went to him then. i just really hope that none of them will regret this after that. i mean... actually SHE didn't speak about her feelings.
Date: 12/10/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 32
whow... i was waiting for sooooo long for this kiss to happen. and now everything is getting more complicated. she can't get out of there... matilda would not understand. and they both understood the whole situation wrong :( they have to talk!!!
and it's not right to think that he had to put his own feelings back :(
Date: 12/10/08 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 31
okay here we go... finally it is time for a review. i read the story so far and what can i say??? i LOVE it. i could feel almost everything they felt in it. i was really hoping that shannon went with nick before something really bad happened and it was so hard when ben hit matilda. then, i kinda knew that nick is her father, dunno why. but i was so curious to find out how this is possible. i think, it was so hard for him to find it out that way. though i actually think he has been a father to her the whole time, at least in some ways. and i think it is the best for all of them. it was the best idea that they move to him, so that they feel save.
the only problem is... they are hiding their feelings. okay, it wouldn't be easy but at least they should talk about it and give it a try.
the last chapter was really cute. i even had tears in my eyes when i read what he wrote on the card. the dvd was sweet too.
so... i'll go on reading, it's like i can't stop ;)
Author's Response: Thanksf for reviewing hun. You are right they are hiding from their feelings and it is going to bit them in the ass big time!