Date: 02/23/08 02:11 am Title: Chapter 12
ok please do not stop there thanks this really is a great story
Author's Response: I'm not stopping there is a big plot twist to this one! Keep on reading!
Date: 02/23/08 12:47 am Title: Chapter 12
wtf..he is goin to kill her she needs to fckin tell nick..my god she's fuckin stupid..get out now. b4 its too late..and what is she thinkin havin a baby with that asshole ..
Author's Response: Thanks for the review
Date: 02/22/08 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh god i hope he donesnt go after her daughter, update soon
Date: 02/22/08 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
I hope she leave him soon x
Author's Response: Me too!
Date: 02/22/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ooo I'm so riveted by this story hun! Ben fits the typical profile of an abuser perfectly by trying to cut Shan off from all her family and friends. Poor Matilda! It really is only a matter of time before she gets caught up in the middle of all this. It frustrates me how no one besides Nick and Jenny see what's going on. Unfortunately, the only person who can save Shan right now is herself. It has to be HER desicion and she's just wayyy too weak right now to make it. I hope that somthing happens to knock some sense into her!
Author's Response: Well I think that something had happened! Thank you for your amazing words makes the writing all the worth while!
Date: 02/22/08 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
HE BETTER NOT TOUCH PRUNE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Please don't hate me if he does, You'll understand why I chose to go this route in a few chapters time!
Date: 02/22/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
cant wait for an update
Date: 02/21/08 02:00 am Title: Chapter 11
nick i sright why cant people see that, update soon
Author's Response: Hope to update today at some point!
Date: 02/21/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 11
man Shannon is makin nick look like a fuck total idiot an he's right and she's being stupid an she needs to get her baby outta that shit..damn whats wrong with her..
Author's Response: That's what happens when people become abused, they feel like they can;t tell anyone even if they are asked about it. Keep on reading because it is about to get really really good!
Date: 02/20/08 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
ooooo......they need to listen to nicky! geeze!
Author's Response: LOL everyon eis getting really frustrated I love it!
Date: 02/20/08 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
oh poor Nick why cant any beleave him that they all thing he being jealous of Ben x
Author's Response: It's frustrating isn't it? I want them to believe him too!! LOL! Thanks for reading
Date: 02/20/08 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Please update asap
Date: 02/18/08 01:47 am Title: Chapter 10
i wish she would just go and run off with nick lol updtate soon
Author's Response: Your not the only person who keeps saying that! They are just friends though!
Date: 02/17/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
This chapter was great!
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 02/16/08 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh dear x that jake an ass lol GO NICK x he can only hit girls but when it comes to guys he a big chicken and he stays behind a girls backs lol x oh Shannon go with him x well phone the police Nick can turn and say look at Shannon with all her marks x update soon pls
Author's Response: Who's Jake? Do you mean Ben? LOL! That's what most abuser are like to chicken shit to stand up to someone their own size!
