Date: 02/10/08 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
Why is Nick the only one sees it x
Author's Response: Because everyone else is blind? Because she is good at hiding it from everyone except her best friend
Date: 02/10/08 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
omfg she needs to freakin tell nick ...they are so close and man if that ben guy hurts matty nick is gonna kill him and her an nick needa frreakin get together you know she wants him...update!!!!
Author's Response: Keep on reading to find out more
Date: 02/10/08 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ah, he's literally controlling her life now. It's terrible. Someone needs to take control over this situation, but it's literally going to go even further than this, isn't it? I really have a feeling that she may be in the hospital one of these days and will be the patient.
Her mother is even concerned now. Ah, I want to know what's going to happen next, so please write more as soon as you can. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for always reviewing
Date: 02/10/08 06:45 am Title: Chapter 7
Oye vey. Why must everyone but Nick be so damned blind to all of this!?!?!?!?!?! [finally caught up-Yay!] I mean, Yeesh!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: If everyone was on to it the story would be no good!
Date: 02/10/08 02:26 am Title: Chapter 7
man she is in deep now, i hoep she leaves him soon before she gets in any deeper, update soon
Date: 02/09/08 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 7
Poor thing, I wish she'd tell Nick, or sometihng. It's going to end up going so far where she could end up in a hospital. I don't want that to happen to her. Her and Maltida needs to be safe 100% of the time and not only half the time. Ben may not be abusing her all the time, but he is some, and that's a dang good reason to leave.
Ah, I hope Shannon realizes what's happening and how Nick won't be disappointed if she asks him for help. She doesn't want to look like a failure to him - but she won't...Nick loves her and will be happy..
This is great. I hope that you'll write more soon. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for your words of encouragement. Keep on reading to find out whether she has the guts to tell Nick or not!
Date: 02/09/08 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
good update! if only mason knew what went into his swing set hahaha
Date: 02/09/08 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh Matilda and Shannon x hehe Kristin and Leighanne are like big sisters to Nick lol x Shannon better leave Ben
Author's Response: I write them like that because that's how I imagine they are, well Kristin anyway. From interviews and videos that she has been in they seem quite close.rnrnThanks for the review
Date: 02/09/08 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
fuck him she needs to fuckin get away from him ..gd i'm fuckin gonna kill him..lol
Author's Response: LOL! I love that your are sooooo into the story! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/08/08 03:11 am Title: Chapter 6
man she should have said somthing to nick about whats going on i hope she does and soon before something bad happens update soon
Author's Response: Thats the thing though, a lotof abused women do not have the courage to speak up.
Date: 02/08/08 01:32 am Title: Chapter 6
Ah, that was great. I'm hoping that everntually she'll come clean with him. I have a feeling that something really bad is going to happen though, Ben doing something to her, before Nick takes control. =/
Please write more as soon as you can. :D
Author's Response: You may well be right with your thoughts Jamanda! Or you could be totally barking up the worng tree! Who knows? Well me but I am not telling! LOL!
Date: 02/07/08 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
listen to Nick do not puch him away for Ben pls update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I want her to listen to Nick to but she's very stubborn!
Date: 02/07/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
such a great job.
Author's Response: Thanks. Keep on reading and reviewing. I am really into writing this one!
Date: 02/07/08 03:20 am Title: Chapter 5
she needs to get the fuck away from him...get nick...
Author's Response: I love how everyone wants her to go to Nick. Maybe she will maybe she won't!
