Date: 02/06/08 06:27 am Title: Chapter 5
is she crazy to have a baby with him i hope she doesnt do it, update soon
Author's Response: Keep on reading to find out whether she is crazy!
Date: 02/06/08 04:09 am Title: Chapter 5
I REALLY am enjoying this story. In fact, I think I like it better than your other one. You've portrayed the mindset of a woman in an abusive relationship perfectly. Such a shame though... You think that being a nurse and seeing abused children like Taylor would wise Shannon up and make her realize she needs to get out of her relationship with Ben. I can't wait to see where you decide to take the story next!
Author's Response: Thanks for your words of encouragement! I am a lot happier with this story too and I am finding it a lot easier to write whereas the other I could sit at a computer and it just wouldn't flow! With this one it seems like I don't have enough time to get everything all down! Keep on reading as all is not what it seems with this story!
Date: 02/06/08 03:22 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Shannon. Hope she feels better. And of course hopefuly Nick finds out about everything soon enough. Take Care! Update Soon.
Author's Response: Will update as soon as I can!
Date: 02/05/08 03:52 am Title: Chapter 4
update!!yeah her and nick needa get togeter now!
Date: 02/04/08 04:10 am Title: Chapter 4
Poor Matilda, that damn Ben has her scare of everyone. And hope Shannon is ok. Hope you update soon. I think your story is great. Take Care!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Keep on reading to find out what happens, there is more then meets the eye to this story!
Date: 02/04/08 12:44 am Title: Chapter 4
i hope he does hurt her she need to leave this guy and go to nick, update soon
Date: 02/03/08 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh Matilda is so cute x I really dislike Ben he butter not hurt Matilda
Author's Response: I'm glad you dislike Ben after all he is the villian so at least i am doingmy job right! Thanks for reviewing
Date: 02/03/08 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
He does abuse her! Oh my dear, I hope that someone will find out..perhaps, Nick, so that something can be done. Ben seems to be just horrible. And Maltida, poor thing. Please write more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review
Date: 02/03/08 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
oye vey......good update, but oye ve. matilda was so adorible with the why areny you my mommys boyfriend spiel lol
Author's Response: I work with kids so I hear a lot of cute statements! That is when they are not screaming the house down!! LOL!
Date: 02/03/08 05:57 pm Title: Prologue
Beautiful written..
I love "oh mother" from Christina
Date: 02/03/08 05:53 am Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter. She's very inteligent, leaving Matilda in Nicks care just in case, but not THAT inteligent that she still puts up with the abuse. Well hope you update soon. Take Care!
Date: 02/02/08 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
i hope every things ok when she goes home update soon
Date: 02/02/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ah, Shannon doesn't seem so happy to be with Ben. She's even lying to Nick about things. I think she should just like...leave Ben, but Ben abuses her, doesn't he? I just..there's a spark there between Nick and Shannon.
I'm excited to see how things will work out in this story, but I can tell things are going to be worse from all of the child violence going on and such. I love how Shannon is putting Maltida first with things, even if she's lying to Nick about why.
Please write more of this story as soon as you can. It's great already. :D
Author's Response: Ben abuses her? Does he? Haha I know but I am not telling!! You'll have to keep on reading! Thanks for you review, means a lot!
Date: 01/31/08 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
sounds pretty fkin great keep up the good work ..can't wait to read ,more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, keep em coming, its the only way I know that what i am writing is worth doing! No use in writing if people do not read it!
