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Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/08 05:24 am Title: Left and Leaving

I like this...has possibilities for a full length story :o)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it does have endless possibilities, perhaps I'll work on it once I finish My Happy Ending =)

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/08 01:31 pm Title: Left and Leaving

hehe that was good Camille did had a good point and take me alot to be on the girl side lol and groundhog remark was so good x to bad it is just a one chapter story b/c it was good

Author's Response: Thank ALM! She did have a bit of a point I think... lol I love the groundhog remark. Lots of people are saying they want there to be more, so in the future I may expand on it. I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/08 02:49 am Title: Left and Leaving

Greatly written! I thing Camille has a great point...Nick didn't even consider her feelings! What is wrong with the male speciies??? I enjoyed reading this!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: shrinkingviolet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/08 05:55 am Title: Left and Leaving

Damn, this was good. I mean, really good. I really felt for Camille, and wanted to slap Nick (men can be so freaking dense). I think you should go ahead and expand on it... *nudges*

Author's Response: Thank you! I think I will turn it into a full length story since it seems like I'm getting such good responses. Thanks again =)

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/08 05:06 am Title: Left and Leaving

wow great job with this, wish youd make a full story out of it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I might possibly do that once 'In Pieces' is done

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 02:21 am Title: Left and Leaving

LOL I hope you don't have to keep explaining why you had a random ground hog mention in there.

Author's Response: LOL I thought it would fit better! Thanks Mare, jeez

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 01:50 am Title: Left and Leaving

Hold up... that's it!?!? I want more! I was so into this and then it just stopped. Friggen loved this scene. Very real and sad. I loved the line "You're acting like a fucking groundhog", absolutely hilarious! Especially his reaction. Oh man, great stuff. Feel horrible for Camille. I think she was really blindsided by Nick's decision to sell the house and move to LA not just because he was leaving but because it really cemented the fact that he wasn't ready to commit. How heartbreaking for her. She should have kicked him in the balls lol Anyway, it was awesome!

Author's Response: Aww Dani, you're so sweet :) I wrote this as a challenge, but now I'm actually thinking of turning it into a whole story. I'm really glad you liked it, that makes me so happy. And the groundhog line was one of the rules for the challenge haha. But anyway...thanks much for reading and possibly soon I'll elaborate on this one a little more. :) xoxo