Reviews For Not So Cinderella
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Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/08 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Ashie, I am so sorry! I thought I had already reviewed this, but I guess I have one too many screws loose in my head to know what I have and have not done. What I am not sorry about is the fact that you stole my idea for the challenge response! Poo to you! I was gonna use the same exact idea as you did! Now I can't. Meanie... Hmpf... Great minds think alike I suppose. LoL. Great job. It was funny. [Ashley]

Author's Response: lol...i cant believe you had the same idea! Great minds do think alike! I sowwy I had the same idea as you though :o(

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/08 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Eww!! lol but I can really picture this whole little scene with Aj watching her sniff her pitts. Great job.

Author's Response: lol...thanks.  :o) I thought AJ would fit perfectly in the scene. I was going to make a reference that this Nicole woman would be more suited to be on a date with Nick instead, but thought that might be a little mean...haha.

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/08 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Eww lol Yea poor AJ... Very gross! The whole pit smelling thing totally reminded me of Mary Katherine Gallagher in those SNL skits w/ Molly Shannon LOL

Author's Response: lol....I've never seen that show but about once or twice...so I haven't had the...'pleasure' of watching that! haha. Thanks for the feedback! :o)

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/08 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1

lol great job that was really funny poor aj ugh and of course i had to be eating dinner while i read this

Author's Response: lol...you should know by now that anything is possible with my stories..so eating may or may not be a good idea while reading. haha. Thanks for the review! Glad you found the humor in this...I enjoyed writing it!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/08 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1

lmao poor AJ! That's what happens when you pick up girl at the bus station I guess. This was funny, well done!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I actually laughed writing it...glad that others are finding it funny also. Bus stations...gotta love the people you may find there! haha

Reviewer: dancinpacer03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

awesome story! it was funny and a disterbing image but u wrote it well! might there be a secong meeting? it would make a funny sequal dont u think?

Author's Response: hahaha...yeah, i enjoyed writing it though...even if it is sick. Might be a second one...like Nicole tracks him down and asks what happened...and the nightmare continues!

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