Date: 02/19/08 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
can't wait to read more
Date: 02/19/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love the "smacked in the head by cupid" line. and it does sound like something Nick would say.
Author's Response: I was hoping that came off enough like Nick might say it!
Date: 02/19/08 04:49 am Title: Chapter 5
holy crap! you cant just leave it like that.. i really hope they find kaiden okay! how the heck did they lose a three year old, nevermind that i loose my brother and sister all the time..lol update ASAP!!
Author's Response:
I was trying to decide whether or not I wanted to leave it hanging for a bit...I had to research some things, and my shows came on. I'll try to get the next chapter out (as long as everyone cooperates) ASAP.
Date: 02/19/08 04:42 am Title: Chapter 4
fantasic update.. it adorable that they are both falling for each other! be warned if he hurts her in any way i will hunt his skinny ass down..lol kaiden is so freakin cute! i just want to take him home with me..lol
Author's Response: I'm not giving anything away on the AJ and Madi storyline. As for Kaiden...he's a piece of work. He's one of those "I'm cute and I know it, so I can get away with just about anything" kids :) If I didn't like him so much, I'd let you take him home! lol
Date: 02/19/08 04:37 am Title: Chapter 5
Oye vey. Figures they'd lsot a kid while at Disney. Yeesh!
UPDATE!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Yeah...I'm working on the update. Having some issues though, so we'll see if my research is effective.
Date: 02/19/08 04:35 am Title: Chapter 3
that was such a cute chapter.. i feel bad that kaiden lost his chance to get to know his dad! :( but AJ is a real good catch!..lol
Date: 02/19/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter 2
awesome update.. madi sure does have her hands full with kaiden!..lol ok, on to the next chapter..lol :)
Author's Response: Yeah, he's a little beast. It get's better, too!
Date: 02/19/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1
i have never read the original one! do you have a website that i can read the first one on or can you email it to me? that would be cool if you could:)
Author's Response: The original one isn't posted anywhere. I kind of like it that way. It's the same story, I'm just re-writing it. The first version was badly written and edited, so this is why I am re-writing it-otherwise I'd just post it as is.
Date: 02/19/08 02:44 am Title: Chapter 4
More...I want more. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm trying to figure out how I want the next part to go, but I should have another update very soon. I'm glad you like it!!
Date: 02/19/08 02:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Ooh I like this...their kiss was so romantic!
Author's Response: The kiss was a total re-write of the first version. It was a long and complicated process, but I had fun, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 02/18/08 08:33 am Title: Chapter 2
ok the story has really caught my attention. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it so far. I got on a roll tonight, so I'm already up to three chapters!
Date: 02/18/08 05:50 am Title: Chapter 1
awesome start so far! madi seems like cool chick as is holly :) wonder what the story is with kaiden ? like where is his dad? holly is funny! cant wait to see what happens next.. update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! This is a re-write of one of the first stories I ever wrote, so it's all generally written. I am just going back and editing all of the chapters so they aren't so cheesy and dorky. I won't give anything away, but hopefully I will be able to update often.
