Date: 04/05/08 06:10 pm Title: COMING SOON!
I REALLY enjoyed this story even though I'm not usually in to this kind of genre, but the title got me curious I admit lol. I think your writing style is brilliant, packed with just enouh humor to make it almost parody like and I love your characterization of Nick. I KNEW that Isa was going to wind up being a Mafia Princess! Great job and I can't wait to read the sequel.
Date: 03/26/08 07:24 am Title: Chapter 19: Eighteen Bullets, Even Superman Could Be Taken Out With That
yay I'm glad Nick's ok, I loved it, i'm going to go read the other one now.
Date: 03/26/08 05:30 am Title: COMING SOON!
Dude that was amazing. When I read the summary I didn't think I'd like, I'm not into stories like this, all the danger. But I'm very glad I read it, off to read the sequel as soon as I'm done here. [:
Date: 03/25/08 12:46 pm Title: COMING SOON!
Haha... enjoyed this story, but you already knew that. Now, off to read the sequel. :)
Date: 03/24/08 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 19: Eighteen Bullets, Even Superman Could Be Taken Out With That
*claps hands* Excellent job Hannah....absolutely loved it!!!
Date: 03/24/08 11:12 am Title: Chapter 19: Eighteen Bullets, Even Superman Could Be Taken Out With That
OMG that was the best story ever
wow can't belive it really amazing
can't wait for second story
Date: 03/23/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Boss Makes Kevin An Offer He Can't Refuse
can't wait for what happen next
updated soon please
Date: 03/20/08 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Boss Makes Kevin An Offer He Can't Refuse
Ohhhh it's getting to the action now, can't wait to read what happens!
Update pleaseeeeeeeee
Date: 03/09/08 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 15: Underwater
i really love this story you wrote it so good
it's like watching a really good mowie
well hope you'll updated soon
Date: 03/06/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 15: Underwater
wow another great chapter
Date: 03/06/08 06:32 am Title: Chapter Three: Brian Thinks Nick Is Crazy For Thinking He'll Swim With The Fishes When Now It Is A Very Real Possibility To Be Nick's Final Demise
Awww poor Nick, no one believes him. I guess it makes sense, since he's probably made up weird excuses like that one before. I really like your writing style, you're doing a wonderful job of making this story really silly and cute.
Author's Response: I can picture Nick now -- "No dawg I swear it... Godzilla was IN the city! That's why I'm late. He like picked up my car, and he was goin like this..then doing this.. and... WHY DOESN'T ANYONE BELIEVE ME?!??" lol =) rnSo yeah, that's why nobody could believe him! Too many excuses in the past. He was the Backstreet Boy who cried wolf!
Date: 03/06/08 06:29 am Title: Chapter Two: Brian and Nick Are Most Definitely The Most Shit On Of the 5 And Nick Is Approached By A Mysterious Stranger Named The Goose
LMAO At the bird shitting in Nick's hair. Wonderful, wonderful stuff. Of course only Nick would accidentally stumble upon the mafia of sorts. Great job!
Author's Response: I got the idea for the bird crapping on Nick's head from my Dad's true-to-life experience with birds... It ALWAYS happens to him!!!
Date: 03/06/08 02:08 am Title: Chapter 15: Underwater
Wow gripping chapter! I had a feeling the FBI dude would come help him!!!
Great chapter
Author's Response: LOL Yay Agent Bryant! <3
Date: 03/06/08 01:18 am Title: Chapter 15: Underwater
this is getting good, update soon.
Author's Response: I'm in the process of writing the next chapter -- it should be up within a couple hours.
Date: 03/05/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter One: The Antics of a Caramel in a Business Meeting
Haha, Nick unwrapping the caramel was brilliant! I really thought that after all the precautions he took to make it quiet, that he'd end up dropping it on the floor, but nearly choking on it was just as - if not funnier than that would have been. I like where this is going, its really funny! Good job! :)
Author's Response: In the original version of the first chapter that I wrote he DID drop it, and kicked it trying to get it where he could subtly reach it and it ended up hitting Kevin under the table. LOL Funny that you'd mention the original outcome of the caramel!
