Date: 03/05/08 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 13: And Now Is the Part Where You Start To Worry About The Boys...
I really like this story
it's so good can't wait next updated
Author's Response: Luckily, you won't have to wait long! I had the 14th chapter written last night and just didn't have the energy to update.
Date: 02/26/08 08:10 am Title: Chapter 12: Do You Know Where YOUR Nick Carter Is?
Ohhhh he is a bad dude!!! I bet it was all a set up throwing him into the river etc....
Nick, you should have ordered fries man *shakes head*
Great update love some more soon
Date: 02/25/08 10:29 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Nick Thinks Training For The Federal Agency Really Sucks Ass.... A Whole Really Lot
i'm enjoying this, good job, update soon.
Date: 02/25/08 10:43 am Title: Chapter Five: It's Really Easy To Fall Asleep When You've Only Had 10 Minutes of Sleep - Even If You Are At An Autograph Signing
AJ's a butthead, but he sounds a lot like me. Haha. Though I'd say by the sound of it they need to start believing Nick. Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Date: 02/25/08 09:41 am Title: Chapter Four: Even Nick Questions Nick's Sanity... At Least Until He Receives An Invitation To The Docks...
Figures Brian wouldn't believe and figures he would blame it on AJ. Hilarious as always. I don't know if you're meaning it to be so funny, but maybe I'm just too easily amused. I'm really enjoying this. Keep up the great work! [Ashley]
Date: 02/25/08 09:27 am Title: Chapter Two: Brian and Nick Are Most Definitely The Most Shit On Of the 5 And Nick Is Approached By A Mysterious Stranger Named The Goose
Brian and Nick are extremely hilarious together. You've got great humor going and I like the way you play it all out. I had a bit of a WTF moment when Nick ran into "The Goose", but the laughs seemed endless. Again, good job and keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Author's Response: I love Brian and Nick together. They're hilarious always in interviews and I imagine they'd be like this off the camera too. :) Thanks for the comments!
Date: 02/25/08 07:32 am Title: Chapter One: The Antics of a Caramel in a Business Meeting
First of all I am still laughing. I loved the antics you had weaved throughout the chapter. Their answers to Kevin's question was more then a laugh and I enjoyed it, especially Howie and AJ's answers. Sounds like something I would say if I were in that situation and not exactly paying attention to what was being said. Then again I am a bit of a smartass. LoL. I like what you have written so far and I am curious to read more. Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Author's Response: I was at a meeting at work and we had similar answers come up concerning loss prevention and I've laughed ever since. This scene was written long before the story was formulated at all. I think this scene and the -uh- "shitty luck" Nick had in the 2nd chapter are my 2 favorite scenes in the story. :)
Date: 02/24/08 08:30 am Title: Chapter Two: Brian and Nick Are Most Definitely The Most Shit On Of the 5 And Nick Is Approached By A Mysterious Stranger Named The Goose
LMFAO. This is freaking hilarious Hannah!! I love it woman!!
Author's Response: LOL I'm glad you like it. :)
Date: 02/24/08 08:13 am Title: Chapter Eleven: Nick Thinks Training For The Federal Agency Really Sucks Ass.... A Whole Really Lot
This is one kick ass story Hannah
Hopefully by the next time you update my face won't be burnt still....I had to use alot of aloe to stop my face from cracking from laughing too much LOL
Update soon though, i wanna know if Nick gets there on time and how he does get there!!!
Author's Response: I'll update it really soon! I had it almost completely written a few months ago and lost the notebook it was all in! I had like one chapter left to do... So it's kind of a bummer to have to rewrite it all but I've since worked a better ending in my head anyways ;)
