Date: 04/17/08 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 21
ah i hope being in atlanta helps or it could make her upset when she sees baylee. lets hope for the former!
Author's Response: Yeah it really could go either way. Thanks mary!
Date: 04/17/08 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 21
So glad to see that they have started to move on... Nick has really proved himself lately. Glad to see he was also affected by what happend...
Hope harmony continues..
Author's Response: Thanks Kris! Nick really has been working hard at their relationship lately, so hopefully the happy streak continues!
Date: 04/17/08 05:52 am Title: Chapter 20
i so loved it such a great job. cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to post more soon =)
Date: 04/17/08 04:50 am Title: Chapter 20
Ugh, fuck the pararazzi. That's horrible! They obviously knew something bad happened, and they STILL decided to butt their heads in their business. So sad.
And Joey is right - at least they're doing it together and not alone. It seems like this experience will bring them closer together (I hope!).
It sucks that Kevin and everyone is finding out what happened with the baby through the tabloids, but I understand why Nick and Ashleigh haven't wanted to tell anyone. I'm wondering what's going to happen between them. Looking forward to what's next! Wonderful chapter darling!
Author's Response: Yeah, the paparazzi really really suck. Anything for a story I guess... but still. Joey is definitely right! This can only bring them closer together =) I agree it really sucks that Kevin and the others had to find out through the tabloids, but I suppose Ashleigh and Nick needed to grieve a little on their own. I'm glad you liked it Dani! There will be more soon!! Thanks for the wonderful review as always :)
Date: 04/17/08 02:59 am Title: Chapter 20
Aw man at least they're closer great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks mary!! :)
Date: 04/17/08 01:54 am Title: Chapter 20
It is just so freakin' sad. It sounds like they are really reconnecting through the tragedy. I can't wait to see where you take it!
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks!! At least some good came out of it, right?
Date: 04/16/08 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh. My. God. So utterly heartbreaking. This is so incredibly sad :( I wasn't expecting them to actually see the baby, but I'm glad they did. It made this chapter much more emotional, even though it was already, but jeez... I can't imagine holding my lifeless child... that has to be so hard. And Ashleigh, gah! She's so right about having to go home. They spent so much time shopping for the baby and getting ready for it, and now that the nursery is done, how are they gonna handle all that? What a cruel situation. And having to tell everybody? It's just wave after wave of pain. Wonderful chapter Steph. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Dani! I'm really glad that you liked it and felt that it was done well because I had a really hard time writing it. I actually had to take a break from this chapter and worked on some homework to distract myself... so that tells you how much difficulty I had writing it lol. Going home for them is definitely going to suck, it'll just be one bad thing after another for them. Hopefully they can manage to get through it together. This really is something that'll make or break their relationship.. I felt it would be important for them to see the child, it kind of made things final, in a way. But again, it was something that was incredibly difficult to think about and write. I really felt awful for causing so much pain for Nick and Ashleigh, but it must be so. I'll try to post an update soon, now that OOProject is DONE DONE DONE!!! Thanks again buddy!! =D
Date: 04/16/08 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
I am sure this was so hard to write, and you did a beautiful job of conveying how they were both feeling. I love the tenderness between Nick and Ashleigh.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: This was ridiculously hard to write and took me three times as long as a normal chapter would, so I'm really happy you think I did a good job with it :) I'm glad you like the relationship between Nick and Ashleigh. Thanks!!
Date: 04/16/08 09:04 am Title: Chapter 19
wow. that was so horribly sad. holding him and naming him and nick really wanting it. ya im sad.
Author's Response: Thanks mary, I'm glad I was able to convey it well =)
Date: 04/16/08 07:39 am Title: Chapter 19
awwwwwwww that was soooo sad but you wrote it amazingly. cant wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 04/15/08 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 18
AWWWWW thats so sad!
Author's Response: Yeah, it was really sad :( Thanks for reviewing Audie!
Date: 04/15/08 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 18
OMG how horrible! Almost the exact same thing happened to my SIL a few years ago.
Author's Response: That's too bad about your SIL :( I can't even imagine how heartbreaking this would be. It was very upsetting just reading/writing about it! Thanks for the review cabybakes!
Date: 04/15/08 07:33 am Title: Chapter 18
omg omg i so did not see that coming. but it was sooooo good. cant wait to see how they make out through this.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully they manage to make it through okay =)
Date: 04/15/08 06:56 am Title: Chapter 18
I SO did not see this coming. This is so horrible, and sad, and heartbreaking. I could just feel Ashleigh's desperation before the whole surgery when she's begging Nick to say something to make it better. I can't imagine carrying a child for nearly 9 months to have it pass away and then have to have surgery to remove it. So unbelievably sad. Poor Ashleigh... poor Nick!
This is either going to bring these two closer, or it's going to push them apart. I have a feeling that all will not be well. Ashleigh's gonna be a bloody wreck for a long time I think. Jeez, just when Nick was looking forward to a baby, it all turns sour.
Gah! Steph! I'm all depressed :( Great chapter though, great twist. I really want to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Awww sorry for making you depressed Dani! This was definitely the hardest chapter I've ever written.. I had to research still births and stuff beforehand.. it was very upsetting. It almost made me not want to write it, but this was my major plot point from the get-go so I had to stick with it. They just can't seem to get a break, can they? I'm glad you enjoyed it =) Thanks for the review hun!
Date: 04/15/08 06:31 am Title: Chapter 18
gah. i knew they would lose it. a part of me was hoping you would let her have it so we could see nick struggle with dealing with a whiney baby. you are on a roll with these updates! yAY!
Author's Response: Awww Nick struggling with a whiney baby would have been hilarious! Thanks mary!
