Date: 01/02/11 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 17
So I saw this story last night, red the first chapter then the next, another one until chapter 17 and it was 3am in the morning haha.
Although it's not about the singer Nick Carter, I feel like it is. When you wright/talk about him in the story, I picture our Nick Carter. Normally I don't like a non-fiction story but this one is really good! Too bad it hasn't been updated for a while....youre probably busy with All that Glitters. But I hope you contine this one soon!
Date: 08/31/10 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 17
It's been months since I've read a fan fic so I decided to visit Absolute Chaos to check out what's new. I skimmed through the "Most Recent" updates and paused when I got to your story.
I read your story probably over a year ago and knew I enjoyed it. I was pleased to see you didn't completely fade away like other fan fic writers do in the middle of a story.
I'm so curious to see how everything will turn out. I was thinking about how there's probably a lot of married couples who are going through a similar situation.
I can tell there's love between Nick and Holly but they both seem to have a lot of internal struggles with their self-esteem and confidence. I think once they can love themselves from the inside then they can be free to love one another. (I felt like I just had a Dr. Phil moment there...)
What I also enjoy about this story is how there's no one clearly in the right or clearly in the wrong. It takes 2 people in a marriage to work, and both Nick and Holly contributed to where they are currently in their relationship. It'll take the 2 of them to either make or break their marriage.
Please don't keep me waiting too long for more chapters :p
Jocelyn
http://www.flirtingwithobscene.com
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for such an amazing review! I'm so glad to see that there are still people reading this out there even though I kind of fell off the planet for a while. Thank you so much for picking it back up and for the very kind words!
Date: 08/24/10 09:57 am Title: Chapter 17
Gina is so mean to Nick, and I think she is jealous, no matter what she insists.
Glad Holly believed Nick, I really feel sorry for Nick in this story.
Date: 08/23/10 09:34 am Title: Chapter 16
Yay, good to see you back as I love this story!
Well, that was an awkward dinner wasn't it! I wonder how Holly will be in the morning? Will she believe him, hmmm.
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back to read! I was worried I would have lost everyone! :)
Date: 08/22/10 04:42 am Title: Chapter 15
All caught up! Love it...more soon, please.
Author's Response: :) Just for you!
Date: 10/02/09 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a really good story...I hope you update it someday soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm hoping to update a bit more frequently now! :)
Date: 05/09/09 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 13
I finally sat down and read this story...so unique, I love it! I can't wait for more, you are a very talented writer. Update soon!
Date: 05/05/09 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
I think Nick is about to get busted!!!! I knew she'd notice the ring, took her longer than I thought it would.
Can't wait to see how he gets out of this one :) Fantastic as always!!!
Date: 04/24/09 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
I am so glad you've been feeling inspired lately. I've been craving an update for this story. I honestly didn't expect the story to go this way and now I am more curious to see how Nick handles Alaina. I'm also wondering how long this renewed passion with Holly will last and if there is a possibility they'll fall back into their old ways. Keep up the writing and I look forward to an update soon.
Date: 04/23/09 11:16 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh my god, I knew he'd lose the ring, I hope he finds it soon before it's noticed. I wonder what'll happen with Alaina now? Will she go quietly or will she cause him trouble?
This is amazing, can't wait for more :)
Date: 04/17/09 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
The guilt is suddenly hitting him, and to see Howie there in the restaurant too, I wonder if anything will happen with that? Hope he remembers to put his wedding ring back on before he gets back.
Loved that chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and for your reviews! You might be a little too good at figuring this story out ;)
Date: 02/03/09 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
I adore this story so far. I can't wait to see how Nick and Alaina's weekend turns out. Please write more soon :)
-Jocelyn
Date: 01/30/09 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
So glad you are back! This story is so fantastic and seems so real.
Hmm, I wonder if Holly will read it?
Date: 01/01/09 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
I thought Alaina was gonna turn into something out of Fatal Attraction for a moment!
Aww this story is so amazingly written and has me hooked, hope you'll add more soon.
Date: 01/01/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
Now that was so satisfying!! About time Nick got to be with someone who actually wants him just as much as he wants them.
Hope Olivia will be OK.
