Date: 10/24/08 08:57 am Title: Thorough Explination
Ok...all I have to say is two words WOW/TWISTED! Wait never mind cause I had to laugh at 'this is a cluster fuck' LOL
Author's Response: You always say that I have a twisted mind, so this shouldn't have come as such a surprise! Oh, and I like the phrase 'cluster fuck' and my mother used to get onto me about saying it so much! HAHA! I'm glad you're still liking the story!
Date: 10/02/08 04:18 am Title: Thorough Explination
Holy hellll....you cant kill Jordan.....that would be fucked up! I cant believe that Nick has so many people after him, and the Mexican Mob protecting him...and and....and....wow, it is a lot to comprehend. You definitely did your research on this one! lol
Author's Response: LOL...who says I can't kill her? I am the one writting the story! *evil grin* I tried to keep it beleivable and realistic, but I'm not in any gang...so i'm sorta winging it!
Date: 07/17/08 04:43 am Title: Thorough Explination
awe....poor Jordan, but yay!!! Now Nick gets to rescue her!!!
Author's Response: Yeah...Nicky needed the chance to be a man and save the woman he loves. lol. Thanks for your review, hun, I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Date: 07/08/08 05:26 am Title: Thorough Explination
haha so just when it seems like your wrapping up the story you throw out another twist. woooo! haha. this story is hilarious!
Author's Response: well, you should expect unexpected twists, from me, by now. lol. but it's not suposed to be 'halarious' it's supposed to be dramatic! lmao. Thanks for leaving feedback...oh, and you might wanna expect some more twists. HAHA
Date: 07/08/08 05:21 am Title: Thorough Explination
Holy Crap!! that's a tangled mess! I hope she doesn't die!
Author's Response: lmao. I hope you are enjoying the story and how it's unfolding. but yes, they are in the midst of a major tangled mess!
Date: 07/08/08 03:30 am Title: Thorough Explination
oh no! please keep them safe! jordan too!
Author's Response: thnanks for still reading! I appreciate your feedback and will try to update again soon.rn
Date: 07/07/08 07:35 am Title: Thorough Explination
HOLY SHIT KRISTAL!!
Man... thanks for making everyhing fall in place, but damn you for leaving us on yet another cliffie!! Lol. So, like I said, I want another update by tomorrow, lol. If not... uh, I dunno. If not, you'll regret it somehow. Lol. But, like I said, I love how you linked it back and how all the pieces to the puzzle came together in this chapter. I bet a lot of lightbulbs of your readers just went off like BAM!! Lol. Can't wait for the next update hun!! =]
Author's Response: I am glad that things started to fall into place for you. I was hoping to achieve that. Thanks for the review and for all your research help! Luv ya Rebby. *muah*
Date: 07/07/08 07:23 am Title: Thorough Explination
No! Not Jordan! He has to get to her and fix it all! I can't wait to see what kind of games these guys have planned! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Yippie Ciyay Motherfucker! Thanks for all your help and feedback! I luv ya Kelly Kell!
Date: 07/07/08 07:23 am Title: Thorough Explination
scary! i don't want to be in that kind of mess. and Nick must have felt so unfortunate for being the popular one in the group. LOL. thanks for the update. =)
Author's Response: poor Nick will figure something out, or at least...he probably will, maybe. lol. thanks for your review and for reading!
