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Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/08 09:13 am Title: Safe Deposit

Poor guys reciting Dr Suess, the word was so obvious. Of course I would have never got it, especially if one of them was with me. Oh man what the hell was in the box woman? Ok...I can't stop reading so I'm off to find out. good chaps girl.

Author's Response: The Dr. Suess thing is pretty messed up, huh? Can you tell I have a 2 yr old? I hope you like what's coming next!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 04:31 am Title: Safe Deposit

LMAO....good thing they got that code right. or else 48 deaths would happen while they waited out the 24 hours. What is the clue though?

Author's Response: It was pure luck!!! Lol.

Reviewer: Anne-Marie K. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 04:30 am Title: Safe Deposit

i would love to know wat comes next...wat is in the safety deposit box?? do Nick & AJ able to rescue Jordan in time?? is Nick able to be with Jordan in the end?? i would love to know wat happens next....i didn't think that this story was very interesting until now...i gave a it a read now i want to know what happens next....keep up the good work...looking forward for an update!!!

Author's Response: Aaaaw, well thank you for giving it a shot. I appreciate that. I will be trying to update tomorrow or Thursday because I dont have to work. I hope that I will be able to still intrigue you as the story goes on. THANKS!

Reviewer: nikki p Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/24/08 04:53 am Title: Safe Deposit

Oh are you kidding me?! What's in it?!?! How could you leave it there? *pouts* This story is getting so good! And Nick was right best place to hide is right in front of you lol
But who got blown up and who shot at them and where are the people that are supposed to protect him??
I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Lmao...so many questions! I have to leave you asking them though, otherwise you wouldn't keep reading now would you? *grin* I promise to update soon, though. Thanks for being so into the story!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 03:37 pm Title: Safe Deposit

What is it?! What is it?!

Author's Response: LOL...you'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 06:30 am Title: Safe Deposit

You always have a cliff hanger!!! GREAT UPDATE....although "And To Think I Saw It On Mulberry Street" is only 9 words!!!

Author's Response: Always a cliffie...keeps ya comin back! And I counted that over and over...I got 9 a couple times then I got 10 a few times...oh well, I was tierd! LMAO. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 12:58 am Title: Safe Deposit

augh!!  more soon!  I want to know what they see in the box!

Author's Response: Lmao...I shall update soon, I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 10:05 am Title: Safe Deposit

what's in there?!

Author's Response: Hmmm, I dunno. *grin*

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 06:58 am Title: Safe Deposit

way to leave us hanging after the wait. lol great job. hahah why was mulbery so obvious? was that mentioned in the story somewhere else? cant wait for more. that was a funny scene.

Author's Response: Lmao...you know I always have to leave you hanging. Mulberry was only so obvious becasue it's in the name of the book...and it has the eight letters. The guys were thinking it was more complicated than that but it was just a main word from the title. I'm glad you liked it, though! Thanks for reading and reviewing, hun.