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Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 07:38 am Title: Chapter 20: Well... At Least The Cab Fare Was Free

Dude, the cabbie was effin' HILARIOUS!! LMAO. What a cool cabbie dude... I wish all cabbies were like that. And oh no... Nick's in trouble!! But he's gonna pull through eh?! Cuz he's gonna saaaaaaaaavvvvvvvveeeeeee the day!! :D Lol. Great update Hannah!!

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 04:24 am Title: Chapter 20: Well... At Least The Cab Fare Was Free

"SHIT this is like an action movie!!" shouted the cabbie excitedly...........LOL Damn that Cabbie is crazy!!!! He rocks my socks off though!!!!

Nick should ring AJ for backup....shit gonna go down soon!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!



Author's Response: LOL the cabbie was loosely based on my brother, Scott. I could sooo picture him saying that.

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 03:37 am Title: Chapter 20: Well... At Least The Cab Fare Was Free

wow this could be movie, great job, I hope Nick's knee is ok, I have a feeling who the Masquerade Murder is but i'll keep that to myself. udpdate soon.

Author's Response: Once it's revealed, you'll have to tell me who you thought it was. It'll be interesting to see if you were thinking the same as me. ;)

Reviewer: paty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 19: Agent Carter's Chance to Save The Day Has Finally Arrived!!!!

I absolute loved this chapter
update soon please!!!!

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 08:47 am Title: Chapter 19: Agent Carter's Chance to Save The Day Has Finally Arrived!!!!

Wow... Nick's hot when he's all business, lol. Go Nicky boy!! And man, I wanted AJ to help save the world too... lol. Seriously can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 04:40 am Title: Chapter 19: Agent Carter's Chance to Save The Day Has Finally Arrived!!!!

LOL kick ass updates Hannah!!!

Update again soon....I wanna se Nick savvvvve the day



Author's Response: LOL one of these times it's gonna become a BSB fan slogan... "he'sa SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAVE THE DAY!" lmfao

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 03:58 am Title: Chapter 19: Agent Carter's Chance to Save The Day Has Finally Arrived!!!!

lol wow I hope he saves the day, update soon.

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 06:00 am Title: Chapter 18: COFFEE! And A Suspicious Looking Bellhop...

wow the Masquerade Murderer has very strong hands, can't wait to read more, update soon.

Author's Response: I've seen people do stuff like that before, lol. Plus, assuming Bryant's phone wasn't very expensive, it's probably not as hard as it sounds like it is... LOL.

Reviewer: Moppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/16/08 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 17: Er - Seriously? Nick's The ONLY ONE Who Thought Of This...?

Listen to ya gut Nick!!!

*shakes head* Nothing good can come out of this :(

Awesome update can't wait to read more

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/08 01:51 am Title: Chapter 17: Er - Seriously? Nick's The ONLY ONE Who Thought Of This...?

Dude our lil Nicky boy is a real genius! Who would've thunk it? lol I'm hooked on this story, update!



Author's Response: I think Nick acts more blonde than he really is. ;)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/08 01:20 am Title: Chapter 17: Er - Seriously? Nick's The ONLY ONE Who Thought Of This...?

OoO... and so the action begins, I like that!! I want another update like NOW!! Lol.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 16: Agent Focque’s Dirty Secret is Revealed…

Uh oh... okay, so I knew Ivana had a part in the murders somehow, but I didn't expect her to get shot, lol. This is getting veddy, veddy interesting... please update soon!!

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 16: Agent Focque’s Dirty Secret is Revealed…

wow update soon.

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 10:11 am Title: Chapter 16: Agent Focque’s Dirty Secret is Revealed…

Holy crap! I knew she had something to do with it!! Lol great update.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 09:51 am Title: Chapter 15: German Chocolate, German Shepherds, German Crime Scene... Dude, Is Fruitcake German?

Oh hell, you would leave it at that, wouldn't you?! LMAO. C'mon Hannah... I did the update for Lost AND I made a shoutout to you. What does a woman have to do to get MORE?! *starts singing Britney's "Gimme More"* Lol, just keeding. I love how AJ is portrayed to be a sarcastic badass (and sometimes, a dumbass, at the same time.) Me loves it!! :D Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: I'd lose your attention if I didn't leave it with cliff hangers. ;) rn*does the Gimme More dance across my bedroom floor, trips on a stray coat hanger and falls down* damn I gotta clean this room.... WHICH! is why there's no update from this afternoon, btw. But I'm working on one now. :)