Date: 04/03/08 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 11: The Masquerade Murderer Strikes Back
So... an agent is missing... Paris Hilton gets shot in her hotel room (which was locked)... yes yes, this is all making sense to me now. Lol. This is getting really interesting. Btw, I LOVE the way you portray AJ in your story, it's flippin' hilarious!! I love how you balance out the suspense and the humor so well. Can't wait for the next chapter hun!!
Date: 04/03/08 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 11: The Masquerade Murderer Strikes Back
OMG that was perfect
I never tought this will happen to Paris
i mean i hate her but still poor girl :)
wonder what happen next?
update soon
Date: 04/03/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 10: Got Questions About Rejuvenation? Call AJ, He's Apparently The Expert.
Wait the door slamming shut as in AJ closing it behind them or someone locking them in there?!
Author's Response: AJ closing it behind them as they leave -- no worries!... YET!
Date: 04/03/08 10:59 am Title: Chapter 10: Got Questions About Rejuvenation? Call AJ, He's Apparently The Expert.
Poor AJ....and I thought you were an AJ lover!!! No ass...no hair....please tell me he's still gonna have teeth!! lol
Great update love to read some more!!!
Author's Response: lmao... I DO love AJ! ..and yeah he still has teeth!! Hey, I took no literary liberties with AJ's asslessness or his hairlessness... so *sticks tongue out*
Date: 04/03/08 07:56 am Title: Chapter 10: Got Questions About Rejuvenation? Call AJ, He's Apparently The Expert.
Haha, have I ever told you that I LOVE reading Nizzle and Jizzle in stories?! The way people make them interact is funny as hell!! And LMAO at Paris STILL not getting the word "RENOVATION" right. Ivana... girl, you is up to no good!! But I also don't like the fact that AJ was only in it for sex... :( Bad AJ, bad.... *ponders really long and hard on what I just said*
Author's Response: lol I didn't really like putting AJ in it just for the sex but I had reasons.
Date: 04/03/08 04:28 am Title: Chapter 8: The Uber Creepy Penthouse Suite Paris Wants To, Like, Reiterate - Or Something Like That
lol I have a feeling Paris is the killer.
Author's Response: LOL I almost named that chapter "Paris Wants To Rejuvinate The Hotel Room (Oh And She's Not The Killer By The Way)"
Date: 04/03/08 04:28 am Title: Chapter 9: Agent McLean Does The Deed... While Nick's Locked In The Janitor's Closet
lol update soon
Date: 04/03/08 02:45 am Title: Chapter 9: Agent McLean Does The Deed... While Nick's Locked In The Janitor's Closet
AJ paused, looking at the TV then up at Nick, "Yeah, sure why not... You're almost thirty."
"Well, I haven't been allowed to do anything else in forever," Nick answered.
"So cherish the moment," AJ replied.
Nick smiled, "I might even go to a vending machine before I go to Bryant's room."
"You rebel you," AJ said dryly, turning away.
LMFAO!! Genius Hannah!! Man, I feel bad for Nick now... I want to slap AJ for the way he's acting towards him, lol. Man, I love myself some Nizzle and Jizzle though, lol. Can you post like... a lot of chapters now?! Lol.
Date: 04/02/08 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Uber Creepy Penthouse Suite Paris Wants To, Like, Reiterate - Or Something Like That
wow this is getting so good this chap was great i was laughing so hard
can't wait for more
Date: 04/02/08 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Uber Creepy Penthouse Suite Paris Wants To, Like, Reiterate - Or Something Like That
*falls over giggling* Renovating...LMAO
Great portrail of the uber creepy heiress *Cracks up laughing*
Update again!!!
Author's Response: I was wondering how people would take the fact that she was in the story at all, actually LOL
Date: 04/02/08 09:29 am Title: Chapter 8: The Uber Creepy Penthouse Suite Paris Wants To, Like, Reiterate - Or Something Like That
Okay, Ivana is wayy too suspicious now. And LMAO at the dialogue between AJ and Paris. Is it weird that I could picture the behavior of AJ towards Paris?! Lol. Another great update, can't wait for the next chappy!!
Author's Response: LOL I can picture AJ being a lot worse actually. Nick, too...
Date: 04/02/08 09:20 am Title: Chapter 7: What Is It With Nick's Ex-Girlfriends Showing Up Everywhere?!
Haha, I laughed hard when I read AJ's dialogue "When are we gonna start detecting shit?" That was funny. And Agent McLean... that sounds hot *totally felt like Paris right there* Great update.
Date: 04/02/08 05:44 am Title: Chapter 8: The Uber Creepy Penthouse Suite Paris Wants To, Like, Reiterate - Or Something Like That
Lmao love how AJ had to keep correcting her, I was laughing so freaking hard.
Date: 04/02/08 04:08 am Title: Chapter 7: What Is It With Nick's Ex-Girlfriends Showing Up Everywhere?!
Poor Nicky, Paris just has to be there! Lmao I can see him rolling his eyes and sighing at the sight of her, like almost every person on Earth does when they see her. Great update!
Date: 04/01/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 6: Agents Bryant and Focque Debrief The Boys On the Masquerade Murderer And The Bloody Trail He's Leaving Behind
This is getting good (I love how you balance out the suspense and the humor so perfectly.) But that Ivana chick seems kida suspicious to me... and AJ's using his little noggin!! Man, can't wait for another update!! Keep up the good work!! :)
