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Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/08 03:46 am Title: Chapter 6: Agents Bryant and Focque Debrief The Boys On the Masquerade Murderer And The Bloody Trail He's Leaving Behind

"Isth muh thung boo?" he asked.

AJ raised an eyebrow. "Yes, your tongue is blue."

Bryant laughed, "You speak fluent Nick, I see," he said.

I absolutely love that part! Mostly because it's true, he probably can speak Nick and Nick probably talks like that. Idk, I can just see that part happening in my head.Great chapter, one of my favorite stories I've read.



Author's Response: The "ish muh thung boo?" "yes, your tongue is blue" exchange actually happened at a concert in went to during the Never Gone tour.. except.. i THINK it was AJ who was asking if his tongue was blue, and Nick responded, "Yeah your tongue is blue, dawg!!!" lmao... Plus I was eating a blue tootsie roll pop. Inspiration! ;)

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/08 03:46 am Title: Chapter 6: Agents Bryant and Focque Debrief The Boys On the Masquerade Murderer And The Bloody Trail He's Leaving Behind

ROFL @ "You speak fluent Nick?"

Ohhh with Nick and the steps...*blushes* I actually have that problem or the steps are to short and half my foot hangs off LOL

Awesome update....very (tries to think of the right TV show) CSI? Detailed yet not confusing...excellent!

UPDATE!!! <--------Coz I could lol



Author's Response: I have the same problem with short steps. lol

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/08 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: AJ Slap the Make On Agent Focque... At Least Until Nick Wakes Up

ROFL AJ got cockblocked by Nick!!! *falls over giggling*

*jumps up and down waiting for next chapter*

Reviewer: Kris Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/28/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 4: The Golden Orb Spider

Loved the update!! Is it just me or does the Nick/AJ situation remind you of Batman/Robin...?? I was humming the Batman theme the whole time... just plz don't give Nick a Batmobile, lol...

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/08 07:33 am Title: Chapter 4: The Golden Orb Spider

Oh no... the world's gonna be saved... by Nick and AJ?! O.O Wouldn't have it any other way. :P Lol. I love the whole spider bit. I LOL with AJ saying "You, Carter, are a sick fucker." Could TOTALLY hear him saying that, lol. Great update Hannah, can't wait to read the next one. :)

Author's Response: lmao i bet aj says that every day.

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/08 05:53 am Title: Chapter 4: The Golden Orb Spider

Nick nodded enthusiastically, "I know, right???" He looked at the picture with a dopey grin on his face. "Dude, AJ.. AJ.. Next time that someone asks me that stupid question about what animal I'd be if I could be any animal in the world... Next time someone asks me that I'm gonna say a golden orb spider cos I could buy uber awesome stuff with my POOP."

lol best line in the story, good job, update soon.

 

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/08 10:11 am Title: Chapter 2: Agent Bryant Needs Help And He Knows Just Who To Call... But Since She's Not Available He'll Settle for Nick

LOL. I love it when Nick's all "I'ma saaaaaaaaaave the day!!" :roll: Damnit, it doesn't work here. Lol. Hannah, I love your stories woman! Lol. Can't wait to read the next update.

Author's Response: I think that's his *trademark line* for this series, officially. LOL

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/08 07:48 am Title: Chapter 2: Agent Bryant Needs Help And He Knows Just Who To Call... But Since She's Not Available He'll Settle for Nick

lol update soon.

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/08 07:06 am Title: Chapter 2: Agent Bryant Needs Help And He Knows Just Who To Call... But Since She's Not Available He'll Settle for Nick

"GIVE ME MY FREAKIN' PHONE, YOU DILDO!"  - You made me literally fall over laughing...I got a sore butt now ROFL

I'm guessing thats what you were laughing at or was it the last line? ROFL dammit my ribs hurt from laughing!!!

UPDATE UPDATE pleasssssssssseeeeee



Author's Response: I was actually laughing because of Nick's line about Howie being a mexican. All I could hear was "MEXICAN RAGE! MEXICAN FURY!" "I'm Puerto Rican! I'll keel you, too!"

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter 1: Nick's Stuck Between a Rock And a Hard Place (...Or At Least Between Window Sills...)

LOL I just thought of something... if AJ was between Brian and Howie he would have been between a Rock and a hard place *falls over giggling*

Author's Response: LMFAO!!!!!!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/08 06:50 am Title: Chapter 2: Agent Bryant Needs Help And He Knows Just Who To Call... But Since She's Not Available He'll Settle for Nick

Ya know it kind of worries me that this agent has so much faith in our little Nicky, what is this world coming to? Lol but seriously this one's great too.



Author's Response: LOL.. At least he hesitated a little bit. ;)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/08 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1: Nick's Stuck Between a Rock And a Hard Place (...Or At Least Between Window Sills...)

Lol, the sad part is I can picture this happening. Like we're talking verrry clear images here, kinda scares me.

Reviewer: paty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nick's Stuck Between a Rock And a Hard Place (...Or At Least Between Window Sills...)

oh can't wait to see what's gonna happend this time
update soon

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/08 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nick's Stuck Between a Rock And a Hard Place (...Or At Least Between Window Sills...)

O my...I laughed sooooooooo hard!!!!! Great, great chapter!!! Thanks for writing and posting it! And I'll hope you'll update soon.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nick's Stuck Between a Rock And a Hard Place (...Or At Least Between Window Sills...)

Haha, that was funny!! Especially with AJ being proud of the fact that he turned Howard on, LMAO. This is gonna be yet another great story done by you Miss Hannah Banana, and it's even greater because Nick's draggin' AJ into helping him solve whatever case Agent Bryant has for him!! :D