Date: 11/02/14 09:17 pm Title: Show Em' What You're Made Of
Just read this from start to now in one sitting today. Really enjoying it. I know it's a strong subject to write about, especially the start, but I think you've done a fab job and written everything very well.
I love the girls inc Jade and Zoe in this story. Those babies are too precious. I'm so glad Jade is Nicks as well.
I look forward to more and seeing where things progress.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it :-) More soon!
Date: 11/02/14 03:48 pm Title: Show Em' What You're Made Of
Oh my goodness. That was so intense! I loved it! You are wonderful at creating subplots that supplement your main plot so well. We as readers definitely know who your main characters are, but you show love to all of your characters and create such distinct personalities for ALL of them. That is no easy feat. I commend you!
I think our lovely girls need a drunken dance party after all this crazy stuff! No boys allowed. Well.. except security, I can here the boys now.. *shakes head*
Also, I am in LOVE with Demyan.. I think it's because he reminds me of Dimitri Belikov who is a character from a series I love, who is a yummy Russian kinda body guard too. AH! Hurry hurry hurrrrrry! I'm dying... :)
Author's Response: Haha I LOVE Dimitri Belikov..vampire academy is great. Thanks for the review, I am already working out how the next two chapters will go & will get to work on them when I get home from my grandparents today
Date: 11/02/14 06:55 am Title: Show Em' What You're Made Of
Don't be so quick to assume they were aiming for Ava, Q. You never know - he could have been aiming for Kathryn or Howie.
Brian, normal people hit the ground when they hear shots - lol. I love him though, like always. *swoons* I still say we need a super cute Brian/Zara scene - one won't allow her to weasel herself into the story more like Ellie did in NMW - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: will update soon - gotta figure out what I'm doing next with other difficult characters that we discussed and such lol
Date: 10/02/14 09:06 pm Title: Business Crisis
They ought to convince Ava to cook for the event. Yup yup.
UPDATE!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Working on the next one already, so soon :-)
Date: 09/30/14 04:10 am Title: Escape
Oh my gosh! I cannot believe you're back to writing this. I was a huge fan of hours back in the day, and for some reason I had the urge to get on AC to check it out. I had to reread everything and it's still as amazing as ever. You have a flair for drama! I just had to create a pen name to tell you this and so I can continue to review! Oh do you happen to still have From This Moment on the web anywhere?
Author's Response: From This Moment? Wow, no one's asked for that in forever lol. Unfortunately I don't have it though. When geocites shut down their hosting site I lost it. But maybe I will attempt to bring it back in the future. Thanks for your review, it's always motivating to know people are reading and enjoying it
Date: 09/28/14 06:49 am Title: That Smile You're Wearing, Its a Beautiful Disguise
They better hope Jade don't come walking out and find them - lol.
I'm glad everyone is working things out and having lovely little romantic nights.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 09/24/14 07:38 am Title: Surprises
Awwwwwww. Nick is suck a sweetheart. He truly loves his little girl and sgehe is for aure Daddy's Little Princess.
And what is up with Kat & Howie? I want to know her story now missy!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 09/22/14 06:33 am Title: The Shape Of AJ's Heart
I totally hope there is a Brian/Zara moment in the next chapter. Lol. You know how I feel about Brian with little kids. *swoons*
Luke is an asshole - you heard my rants about him previously. He is going to get his ass kicked and have my pointy sticks shoved up his ass if he don't BACK OFF. And Tierja needs to get a damned grip. She jumps to conclusions to easily & is a bitch.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I still can't believe Q is gone. I miss him.
Date: 09/18/14 04:24 pm Title: Doubt
Obviously he needs time to get over the shock of it. Tierja needs to get a damn grip. He is a Backstreet Boy and their fans can be unpredictable at times.
And Kathryn totally like Demyan. I can tell. Craziness. No wonder Howie is pissed.
Thinking about it now, I bet Luke paid that woman to kiss A.J. like that just to upset Tierja, as he wants her for himself. Don't trust him girl! He's a snake!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 09/10/14 03:58 pm Title: Finally Happy
Loved the ALAYLM scene! Zara is one lucky kid! Wish Briab would sing ALALYM to me! Though he did sing the important line of INBYH to me. :-)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 09/08/14 05:31 pm Title: Needed
Great chapter can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is in progress
Date: 09/06/14 10:17 am Title: Needed
I think I want to play with that Barbie limo. The one I remember used to have a pool on the back end of it. Or maybe that was on a T.V. show....lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I kinda want to play with the Barbie limo too LOL. And I already have 3 pages written so far :-)
Date: 09/04/14 01:42 am Title: Stalked
Great job I hope you update soon this ff is one of my favs :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I was worried people lost interest in it. I'm working on the next chapter now, so it will be up soon
Date: 09/02/14 10:03 pm Title: Stalked
Great chapter! That stalker better stay away or my pointy sticks are coming out!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 08/27/14 06:34 am Title: Jealousy
I don't like Luke. He's a jerk, A.J. loves her just fine but was being a chicken shit.
I love Q when he is with kids. Him and kids just seems natural.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~