Date: 12/13/12 01:36 am Title: Being Strong
love it... god i hope something doesn't happen at the park.. bc im pretty sure thats what happened last time... in the different version of it... ugh i just want them happy and really want her to realize that when nick is being "bossy" if you will that he is only playing that he loves her and that she doens't get to scared away bc he would never treat her like david..
Date: 12/09/12 06:23 am Title: Being Strong
I'm am utterly captivated by the tail that you have weaved!
You put so much passion and emotion into each character that you can sympathize and relate to the feelings they have.
I love how your story line flows effortlessly. And it's dealing with real issues that happen to people everyday.
I just wanted to let you know that this story has made me a true fan of your art. I am looking forward to reading the your other work you've posted as well.
Keep up the amazing work. :0) (@Ima_Buckeye_Grl)
Date: 12/07/12 07:24 am Title: Being Strong
And we all know he will break it, because he's a possessive idiot.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/01/12 07:32 am Title: Stubborn Denial
So happy that everything has worked out and the blessing has been given. Now what's up with shy non moving fast A.J. he had better get with the love program and fall in line before it's to little to late. Hope you have a great weekend & thanks for the updates! : )
Date: 11/30/12 01:11 am Title: Stubborn Denial
awww how sweet.. i've definetely noticed the changes they are for the better i think.. man i so don't want her to get kidnapped at the park as im alsmost positive that is what happened in the last story.. i read it beofre but is been sucha long time since ive read the original and im loving this version.. please let the kiddo be okay.. and don't leave me hangin i really want this one to be finished... glad they are together and glad you decided to write on it somemore bc its a great story... update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I've re-written this story quite a lot in the past lol. I have at least 2-3 versions of it in a notebook in my room somewhere and its fun to go back and read them some times. I'm pretty satisfied with this version too though and I am determined to finish it, so we'll see. Thanks for the review, Next chapter will come soon, I plan to start working on it tonight.
Date: 11/29/12 07:16 am Title: Stubborn Denial
I'm glad they've worked everything out Ok for the time being.
UPDATE!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Yes ma'am, I shall get right on that asap lol
Date: 11/26/12 06:56 am Title: The Hardest Thing
So glad you are back to this story I was thinking about a few weeks ago and I get a email! Super excited! :) Btw Happy late Thanksgiving!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad there are still people interested in this story :-)
Date: 11/24/12 07:17 pm Title: Wanted
Wow, I was so suprised to see this story on the most recent page! I totally remember this story when it was posted for the first time and fell in love with it then! That's actually why I started reading NMW =).
I suck at reviewing cause I'm usually on my phone and it's too complicated to log in and post from there, but I just had to let you know that I never gave up on your stories (turned my computer on just for that^^)!! Can't tell you how often I've re-read NMW and AHWH, I think almost at ten times now O.O
Totally sucked when NMW got deleted and there were now updates for this one, but I hope you'll get back on track. Just to tie me over I think I'll re-read NMW again^^
So, just had to let you know that you still have very patient readers, who just suck at reviewing!
On that note: UPDATE SOON Please!! =)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks, more coming soon :-)
Date: 11/24/12 05:37 am Title: Wanted
David deserves to rot in hell. And I'm glad she finally told Nick the truth about Jade.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 10/30/12 07:53 pm Title: I Can't Do This Anymore
Tsk, tsk. You call Ava, Ashley instead. Haha.
~Lenni~
Date: 05/17/09 03:21 am Title: Escape
please update i love this story
Date: 01/09/09 11:42 pm Title: Tell Him The Truth
awwwwww FINALLY!!! finally she is giving him the chance. i can imagine how lucky he is now. and awwww he is jade's daddy. i kinda had a feeling that he is. that is so great cause they are so cute together.
well, i really hope that david is not going to hurt them again. ava, nick and jade deserves it to get lucky together. and i'm sure that jade will be happy when they tell her that nick is her daddy.
Date: 01/09/09 11:11 pm Title: I Can't Do This Anymore
brian an raven are so cute together. and i think if ava and nick go on like this, their friendship won't survive :(
Date: 01/09/09 05:36 pm Title: The Silent Treatment
Actually, i can understand that aj is a little angry about the way nick is acting. though nick is really hurt. and i'my dying to know what he is working on.
Date: 01/09/09 05:00 pm Title: The Hardest Thing
whow... i had tears in my eyes to be honest. i can imagine how hard it was for nick to finally confess his feelings to her. her reaction must hurt him really bad. i can understand her only a little bit that she is scared after what she has been through but nick is so right, she has to know that she can trust him and that he'll never hurt her or jade.