Date: 11/30/08 05:12 pm Title: With Truth, Comes Difficulty
i think you are crazy or you you have a strong imagination!
Author's Response: Well...in fiction a strong imagination is good...and kind of needed. So...yeah lol
Date: 11/17/08 07:50 pm Title: With Truth, Comes Difficulty
wow!!! more sooon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, hopefully this inspiration streak stays with me lol
Date: 11/12/08 05:31 pm Title: Confusion and Seclusion
interesting chapter! more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 08/09/08 08:29 am Title: Between Worlds
I'm confused about why half of this chapter seems familiar. lol
Have I read it before?
Anyway, good job. :D I bet that monster's back. ;o)
Author's Response: Cause I showed you part of it as we talked LOL.
And...interesting guess hehe
Date: 08/03/08 08:45 am Title: Between Worlds
wow This is really good. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Well thanks, its always nice to see new readers :)
Date: 08/03/08 08:04 am Title: Between Worlds
oooooh more soon!!!
Author's Response: A new reader! yay! Glad you liked it
Date: 07/21/08 07:55 am Title: Feels Like Home
Ooh, you did change it. I'm kind of glad the Boys followed Nick to our world. lol So, does that mean that time flows differently in Fylgiar than it does on Earth? Coolness.
And I liked how you connected it to his sun tattoo; love that thing
Update soon. :o) And don't let writer's block get you down. :o)
Author's Response: Told you I was gonna mix up a few things. Like the boys following rather than having alternate versions. For reasons I'll say later. I love the sun tattoo, to me there had to be a sign somewhere of his connection. And writer's block sucks! lol
Date: 07/21/08 07:40 am Title: You Have No Idea
It's so twisted; I love it. lmao
And poor confused Nick... I take it her companions are the other Boys? ;o)
Author's Response: LOL Twisted is always so much fun isn't it?
Date: 07/21/08 07:28 am Title: You Think You Know
Poor Nick. lol That would suck to have glowing fingers and strange headaches.
And staring at your own tombstone must be the shocker of a lifetime. lol
I'm sorry, it's not funny but it's after midnight, you know?
Author's Response: You're so special lol.
Date: 04/29/08 05:29 am Title: Prologue
okay, so i just reread this and now i'm wondering a) who the fifth guardian is if little 5 year old nick was the one who died and b) are the other 4 powerful in both worlds or do they, too, have their counterparts in the BSB world? hmmm...so many questions, so few chapters!
Author's Response: LOL it's good you caught that, cause obviously Nick is not it if he died at age 5 :). As for the other 4...well that should be answered soon :)
Date: 04/29/08 05:27 am Title: You Have No Idea
okay. still confuzzled lol but I am amazed at the detail and the imagery that must've been in your mind when you wrote this. Wow. It just all sounds so vivid, from the howls to the descriptions of Tawny and the mutating faye. Nice! One more thing: how on earth do you think up the names for these creatures? I think that takes a special talent all in itself. Lovely chapter, Rose...and now I'm really curious as to what is going on...so I shall go read the prologue again in hopes that it gives me some clue lol
Author's Response: You're supposed to be comfuzzled lol. Thankies about the descriptions, when I came up with this idea I had this whole world in my head and I'm trying so hard to get it across on paper. Yay for someone thinking I did it alright! The names for the creatures...actually came from types of faeries in legends. Cyhyraeth is the name of a welsh fairy who will start her keening wail to foretell death/deaths. I looked for names after I wrote down the chapter :) so I kinda cheated lol. But thankies hehehe
Date: 04/29/08 05:19 am Title: You Think You Know
LOL at the Tinkerbell wannabes line! And, now, with the epitaph, I'm all sorts of confuzzled. Hmmm...I'm trying to connect the prologue to the events in this chapter and am coming up with my wires crossed, so i suppose i must read on lol I love your use of imagery, Rose! I'm actually trying my hand at writing an urban fantasy with magic, so I'm starting to notice the way writers use magic more and more...must. keep. it. all. in. mind. lol
Author's Response: lol I'm obsessed with Tinkerbell, I love her, fave disney person. So I had to mention it somewhere. I know it's confusing right now, but that's sort of what I'm aiming for right now since Nick himself doesn't have a clue :p. But I swear it'll all connect. This helps with my day from hell today so I love you for reading this lol. I hope your Eye of Doom is better :. So thankies, hehe.
Date: 04/26/08 10:53 pm Title: You Think You Know
Interesting start! I like it so far... and I'm anxious to read more! I like your use of description and the way you word things, especially in the prologue. Just watch your tenses... you tend to switch tenses, even in mid-sentence, and it takes away from the flow of the writing. But going back to the descriptions, I like the two suns and the purple grass and the blue leaves and everything... how it all mimicks our world, but surreal and just "off."
Author's Response: Tenses are always my biggest issue, I try to catch em, but maybe I need a beta for it. I'm glad you like the descriptions that was exactly what I was aiming for, somehwta like our world but with a surrealness that throws you kind of off. Thankies for the review, glad you like it. Cause yeah, you're Julie and awesome haha.
Date: 04/15/08 10:32 pm Title: Prologue
I know what's going to happen. lol
I still think four is better. :P But I like the pentagram. :o)
Author's Response: lol :P I told you I liked this idea too much. And hey I wanted 5 cause it sounds better lol. Like a pentagram :P
