Date: 08/12/08 01:31 am Title: Chapter Three: AJ Knows
Very touching...I like the confession.
I only wonder about the realism of this? is this the way two guys would talk to one another? It's good though, lemme know if you need any suggestions
Date: 05/05/08 05:45 am Title: Chapter Three: AJ Knows
loved the update!! glad that aj is their for him...update soon
Date: 05/04/08 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Three: AJ Knows
okay, so I am interested to see where you are going with this. but, honestly, you should make the chapters a bit longer or update more often. *smiles* As of this point that is all I can say. I look forward to the next update, tho!
Date: 05/04/08 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Three: AJ Knows
Would love to see longer chapters as this story is good!
Author's Response: i try to keep them a bit short for two reason:rn1. i hate reading draggy storiesrn2. i'm having trouble coming up with ideas.rnbut, i will try to make it a bit longer next time.rndo you have a any suggestions of what you would like to see?rn