Date: 08/12/08 01:34 am Title: Chapter Four: Late-Night Eavesdropper
Hey, you have a typo in one of the first two lines, it says like he said me drive, or something like that, and I really like this passage ".” For a second my blue eyes met his brown. Neither of us broke the gaze. I don’t know why but I just couldn't look away" it's worded really well.
Date: 05/11/08 09:35 pm Title: Chapter Four: Late-Night Eavesdropper
that was so sweet
i hope you'll update soon
Date: 05/10/08 05:02 am Title: Chapter Four: Late-Night Eavesdropper
It's 1am and I'm writing a review to you.. you better be freaking happy after this, you silly girl. XD Haha.
Well, I loved this part.. you could really feel the intensity when AJ spoke about Nick breaking it off with her.. and then the passion when AJ came back when Nick was "sleeping." It's good. :]
Author's Response: i am freaking happy!rnthat's good because i was really hoping that in this chapter AJ's feeling would come off strong.
Date: 05/10/08 02:57 am Title: Chapter Four: Late-Night Eavesdropper
Awww Nick wants AJ to stay with him....wonder if he'll mention it in the morning or if Nick will wait to see if AJ comes back again the next night and surprise him?!?!?
Author's Response: Hmm.i didn't think of him coming another night...*lightbulb goes on* i guess you'll just have to wait and see.
Date: 05/10/08 02:42 am Title: Chapter Four: Late-Night Eavesdropper
well, I am working on LATB's next chapter RIGHT NOW! and it's already about half done! so THERE!
Oh and sorry...I always jump to the AJ puppy face because that man's eyes just...do...thing to me. buuuut, I guess I can pull a Nicky impression for you. *cutest Nick puppy face ever*
On top of that I will even do the cutest *lopsided Nick grin*...just for you.
Now where's my update?
Author's Response: yay!AJ's cute and all but how can you resist the famous Koas fac?!ok, i'm working on it now.i don't if i can post it tonight though but i'll try.Aww, i LOVE his grin!! =]
Date: 05/10/08 02:16 am Title: Chapter Four: Late-Night Eavesdropper
alright, listen here missy lou *hand on hip pretending to be vary mad*
*points finger at you* I refuse to post another chapter of Life According to Baylee until I see more updating from you! *gives you my best 'do it or your in trouble' look.
I want to see what happens *gets all whiney* Why you gotta go and leave it there, like that? lol. Update soon? *gives you the AJ puppy face that no one can resist*
Author's Response: missy lou? i'll go with that.rnrnfirst, whatch where you're pionting that finger. lol. I refuse to write another chapter of "Degraded" until you update "Life Accoreding to Baylee". so..HA! rnrnsecond, i don't know what's gonna happen...or maybe i do..and maybe if you could pull off a Nick puppy dog face i'd give in.