Date: 08/18/08 04:26 am Title: Chapter Ten: Big Problem
Oh wow, Linds. This is freaking AMAZING. Have I told you how good of a writer you are?! Sheer talent, I swear. :] This is SUCH a big cliff hanger. :P I hope a lot of people liked it!
Date: 08/17/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Ready For War
i love this story it is awesome and sweet please please please please update lol
Date: 08/17/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Ready For War
loved it! i hope that brian and kevin dont take it to badly when itfinally comes out.. update soon
Date: 08/17/08 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Ready For War
i love it
this chapter was great and the whole story is awesome
please update soon!!!!
Date: 08/17/08 06:01 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Ready For War
I love this story keep it up!!!!
Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to read&review. i really appretionate it! i'm really happy that you like it.
Date: 08/17/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Ready For War
Awesome chapter... cant wait to see how the others are going to react... Brian & Kevin behave! J & Kaos love eachoter so let them be and be happy for them :)
Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to read&review. i really appretionate it! =]
Date: 08/17/08 03:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Ready For War
Rather short-lol. And shit is definitely gonna hit the fan when Brian & Kevin find out. Especially Brian.
UPDATE!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Yea, a lot of my chapres are short, sorry about that. Most deffinately. But, maybe they can hide for a bit longer..maybe not.
Date: 08/12/08 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Big Problem
hmmmm,well oh man oh man update!!!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm trying. =]
Date: 08/12/08 07:42 am Title: Chapter Ten: Big Problem
Lmao! Like hanging up on him wasn't a dead give away - haha.
UPDATE!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Haha. Serious trouble is brewing for our boys..
Date: 08/12/08 02:51 am Title: Chapter Ten: Big Problem
Uh oh...
you're doing a really good job keeping the reader interrested, this is really good writing
Date: 08/12/08 02:47 am Title: Chapter Nine: Suspicious Cousins
haha, the smell of his cologne, love it, and on one of the lines, its says "we couldn't thank his enough but"
change it to him.
Date: 08/12/08 02:44 am Title: Chapter Eight: My Angel (AJ's Point of View)
I like how you changed the POV, it worked really well
Date: 08/12/08 02:43 am Title: Chapter Seven: Recovering
awww I knew AJ would find him :)
and i love the last line of this page
Date: 08/12/08 02:41 am Title: Chapter Six: Shouldn't Have Done That
Yikes, I'd write more of a review, but i'm wayy to eager to get to the next page, super good btw
Date: 08/12/08 02:37 am Title: Chapter Five: Really Seeing AJ
Ohhh now I get why they were talking like, not two guys a few pages ago, i get it now :)
