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Reviewer: emeraldbecca1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/13 03:54 am Title: Epilogue

this was a beautiful story

Reviewer: emeraldbecca1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/13 10:07 pm Title: Prologue

let me guess...the guardian is Nick, right?

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 08:53 pm Title: Epilogue

An update after so long and it's the end? No.......well can't wait to see what happens next for Baylee and his future! And let's not forget Nick.

Loved this story, great work!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. i'm thrilled that you've enjoyed the journey. There's more to come!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/11 03:07 am Title: Epilogue

Awww. I miss this story all ready! Lol.

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Aaaaw! You just miss chasing Kevin with a pointy stick. LOL! =P I love ya Lenni, thanks for being such a loyal reader and reviewer!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 10:42 pm Title: Epilogue

Aw Kristal! What a great ending to a GREAT story. I know I told you this over AIM, but you should definitely be proud of this. You have grown so much as a writer over the course of this story, and the characters have grown with you. Baylee is so much more insightful than the brat he was at the beginning, lol. Great, GREAT story, hun! I loved how you brought it full circle with how at the beginning, Baylee didn't even call him "Nick" but just "my guardian" and last chapter he said he was worried he'd slip up and call him "dad" FABULOUS! So much love.

Author's Response: I'm SO happy you've enjoyed this story, Steph! You've been a great reader and reviewer. *hugs* I hope you'll continue to like the rest of the series as it continues.

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Sixty-Six

Can I just tell you how much I LOVE Baylee and Nick? They have grown so much over the course of the story. I loved Nick finally breaking down and telling Baylee how hard everything was for him. Having to lose his best friend and suddenly take custody of his son could not have been easy. This was a really good chapter! They seem to have a new respect for each other.

Author's Response: Aaaaaaw! Thank you so much Steph! I love your reviews and appreciate that you've been a loyal reader! Respect is definitely starting to get stronger between these two. It's abotu time they let go of the pent up emotions.

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Sixty-Five

Poor Baylee.. teenage years are rough as it is so having to deal with the fact that his parent died must be torture. No wonder he finally blew up. And Nick is just wonderful, listening to him rant and offering his advice. Aw Nicky is all grown up, lol. Great chapter hun!!

Author's Response: Baylee really needed this, didn't he? It was long over due! It was interesting to write out all these emotions. I'm happy you liked how it turned out.

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Sixty-Four

Awww poor Baylee. That dream sounded rough. I liked how he was able to go to Nick for comfort though. That was really sweet.

Author's Response: Can you imagine?! I'd hate to be stuck having dreams like that. At least they are starting to get a bit closer and Baylee is allowing Nick to be there for him. I'm glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 10:28 pm Title: Epilogue

Oh wow Kris, I've loved this story from start to finish and although it's sad that this has come to an end, I'm looking forward to whatever is to come :)

It's been a great journey!

Author's Response: Thank you, very much for sticking with the story all this time! I've loved every one of your reviews! *hugs*

Reviewer: RebelGrl18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 06:51 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Six

woman is that the end or what?? lol i dont talk hardly to ya anymore.. but i miss ya fry lady! :P great chapter. it made me cry!!

Author's Response: LMFAO!!! Nope....but the end IS up! We should talk more often! =P

Reviewer: MrsCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 04:57 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Six

Great job

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Sixty-Six

It may be a short chapter but it was a good one! wow...
Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm thrilled that you liked it, even though it was a little short.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter Sixty-Six

What a great chap! I'm glad that Nick was able to break down a bit and I'm glad that Baylee was there to comfort him. Love the last section with Baylee admitting his fear of Nick replacing his dad. They probably should have had this talk awhile ago. Hope you can update soon!!

Congrats on the noms. They are well deserved :)

Author's Response: Oh yes...they have needed this talk for a LONG time now, right? It's good that they finally got it all out on the table. Thank you for reading and leaving me feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Six

Great chapter!! So many bottled up feelings coming out for them both, which I think is a good thing.

Author's Response: Thank you! It was pretty intense...but they really needed to get this stuff out! It was very much needed!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter Sixty-Six

Awwww. I feel so bad for these two! They've defonote;y kept a whole lot bottled up. You almost made me cry....lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I keep waiting for Baylee to slip & call Nicky, 'Dad' too - lol.



Author's Response: Aaaaaw! You're just as attached as I am, to the characters, huh? I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter Lenni...I appreciate your reviews.