Date: 05/16/08 07:53 am Title: Chapter One
Jum, turning Nick down? What the heck is wrong with her? Sh has to be crazy,lol. Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what's bothering her so much. Take Care!
Author's Response: LOL No kidding, I know I would never turn Nick down haha! Thanks for the review, Yara!
Date: 05/16/08 07:44 am Title: Prologue
Jum, he's leaving the girl behind, I know it. lol. Poor thing.
Author's Response: You'll just have to read and see ;)
Date: 05/16/08 07:09 am Title: Chapter Nine
lol! "Are you guys clothed?" I don't know why, but that really hit my laughter button. Oh lordy. Of course there had to be a bit of a tiff between them before he left - it would only be fitting ;) Nick's excuse was lame. There was plenty of time for a quickie. Way to turn a girl down! She's already upset that he's leaving, Jesus. He's not very good at these social things. I know at some point Nick is going to regret letting Camille live with Chris, but I'm curious as to how that's all going to play out. I'm excited! Wonderful chapter! It actually got me in the mood to write, so I might have to scamper off and begin a little somethin' somethin'. *HUGS!* Lovely job girlie!
Author's Response: Hehe, of course they had to fight, it wouldn't be Nick and Camille otherwise :P Nick shooting her down had to have sucked, if I were Camille I would have told him to suck it up and tackled him. Uhh, but that's just me lol. The juicy drama is definitely going to start soon!! I'm excited to write it! And yes, you should go write! ;) Thanks so much Dani! Have a good weekend, buddy :)
Date: 05/16/08 07:02 am Title: Chapter Eight
Huh, Chris called at the most inappropriate time eh? And Camille's reaction? What the fudgeicles? Dude, if I were Nick, I'd be a bit skeptical about how giddy she is when Chris is around, cause that's more than just platonic right there. I see juicy drama coming up soon lol I'm glad they had a nice little romp in the bedroom though - they needed it. And I can only imagine that Nick will REALLY miss her when she's not there. He's definitely gonna realize how good he had it and what he's missing out on... so I can either see it strengthening their relationship or the two of them might just fall apart. I can't wait to see! Great chap my friend!
Author's Response: Yeah, way to give them time alone eh? lol way to be lame, Chris! Oh no kidding Nick should definitely be kind of weary about Camille's reactions towards Chris. I guess he just trusts them, but it might not end up working out too well for him in the future haha, we'll have to see! Thanks for your feedback, Dani! It is mucho appreciated, as always :) *hugs*
Date: 05/16/08 04:18 am Title: Chapter Nine
wonderful, as usual! *wink*
Author's Response: Thanks Kristal! :) Glad you're liking it!
Date: 05/16/08 03:53 am Title: Chapter Nine
No goodbye sex...noooo...damn the Chris. Update soon, friend! HUGS!
Author's Response: Yeah, no goodbye sex :( Chris totally sucks lol. Thanks girlie :) *muah*
Date: 05/16/08 12:19 am Title: Chapter Nine
how could he not get nookie before he leaves? ah so sad.
Author's Response: LOL I know eh? Damn Chris (or at least, the thought of Chris) always has to ruin everything haha. Thanks mary! *muah*
Date: 05/16/08 12:10 am Title: Chapter Nine
Aww long distances are tough. I hope they can work it through.
Author's Response: You're telling me! LOL. Yeah long distance definitely blows. We'll see what happens :) Thanks!
Date: 05/15/08 02:30 pm Title: Chapter Eight
OK...I love the reference to the horrible old outfits, too funny! Great chapter...noticing a little interference from Chris...5 minutes is not time alone! Great job, girl - can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response: Thanks girlie!! Nick has had some horrible outfits over the years, hasn't he? LOL! I'm glad you picked up on Chris's interruption ;) Things should start to get interesting in the next few chapters!
Date: 05/15/08 07:10 am Title: Chapter Eight
Oooh nice update! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 05/15/08 06:37 am Title: Chapter Eight
somehow i dont see her wish coming true. hmm.
Author's Response: We'll see ;) Thanks for the review mary!
Date: 05/15/08 06:03 am Title: Chapter Seven
Steph, you articulate yourself very well. Seriously, I've always envied you because of it. Your thoughts flow very well from one to the next and I always finish these chapters so quickly! It makes me sad lol But it's wonderful writing. Truly. This is the first chapter that I went "awwww" to the small degree that I had for Ashleigh and Nick, though I doubt I will ever gush as much as I did then lol But these two did have a nice, cute, lovey-dovey moment, and I'm glad. It relieved a bit of the tension. I see now that they do love each other... it's nice to have that reassurance lol! Poor Cam though. If she was in the mood to fight, she should have brought up the fact that it is nearly every girl's dream to get married and have this glorious wedding cause honestly, he can swallow his pride and do something that makes HER happy. It's not like marriage really changes much if you've been in a committed relationship for so long.. jeez. Anyway, I LOVE THIS STORY! I can't wait to read more! And yay for being done with finals! WOOOOOO!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Dani!! It makes me giggle with delight that you envy my writing, because honestly as I was reading Unsuspecting I would sit there and think to myself "I wish I could write like her!" No word of a lie! To to have you say that you like my writing and think it flows well is a HUGE compliment and I thank you muchly for it! I sort of felt as though Camille and Nick went through a little too much drama, they needed a bit of a happy time before they left. Though, I will never enjoy writing them as much as I enjoyed writing about Ashleigh and Nick. But true enough, Nick really should be swallowing his damn pride lol cause you're right it really wouldn't change much if they're going to be together anyway. I'm glad you like this story so much girlie!! Thanks for your feedback as always, and you won't have to wait at all for more, because I just posted an update! :) And finals being done is always a good thing! Time to PARTY!!
Date: 05/14/08 02:27 am Title: Chapter Seven
FINALLY...a bit of happiness! I love this chapter, love the tenderness of the moment, love that they both put their guards down and are communicating! Can't wait for more, great job!!! Hugs!
Author's Response: I know! I realized that this story was just drama drama drama without any happy times. And Nick and Camille really did need to talk. So finally, they're able to communicate with each other. Just in time for him to leave lol. Thanks a bunch hun! *hugs*
Date: 05/14/08 01:32 am Title: Chapter Seven
Aww! So cute! She's wearing Nicky down! LOL!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was cute, that's what I was going for. This story had too much angst and needed a tender moment, LOL! Yeah, he's starting to see it her way... just a little hehe. Thanks for your reviews! :)
Date: 05/14/08 01:27 am Title: Chapter Six
LOL! Women and their marital wishes.
Author's Response: Hehe, Camille is rushing things a little, isn't she?
