Date: 06/06/08 08:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Awww *sniff* That was so sad! Nick will find true love one day. He will!
Author's Response: Yeah, it was sad. Nicky will find love eventually :) Thanks Rachel!
Date: 06/06/08 08:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty
oh my poor Nick and Camille they both love each other so much but i think they both need some growin up to do and away from chris. Also maybe time apart and see other people they could find each other again x
That Chris got of little to easy but i think chris is a type of person to do something if Nick hurts him if it means getting to be with Camille x
Author's Response: Yeah, they definitely need to stay far away from Chris! Time apart will be a good thing for them. Chris did get off kind of easy and it was really slimy of him to hurt Nick to get to Camille. Oh well, maybe the fact that he's lost his best friend will be punishment enough. Thanks for your feedback, ALM!
Date: 06/06/08 05:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty
It's so sad what's happening to both of them, they love eachother but obviously their relationship is not a healthy one. Hope they both find the happiness they want, even if it's not with eachother. Take Care!
Author's Response: It really is sad what happened with them, but I guess it can't work out every time. I hope they find happiness too :) Thanks a bunch, Yara!
Date: 06/06/08 04:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty
What a slimebag...that Chris...trying to booze her up and take advantage. I think you wrote this perfectly...perfect proposal, perfect response...I love that Cam knows Nick enough to see past herself and even though she wants it, he doesn't. They couldn't be happy, sometimes it just doesn't work, no matter now much you love eachother.
I am impressed, my friend...super duper job!
Author's Response: Awww thanks so much hun! I'm glad it came out well because I had this scene written in my head for the longest time. I was almost afraid to write it in case it didn't turn out how I wanted hehe. It's too bad that it didn't work out for them, but at least it didn't end too too badly. I do have to thank you, because it was you that gave me the idea to have Nick walk in on them, so thanks much for that! *muah*
Date: 06/06/08 04:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty
awww im crying
Author's Response: Awww, thanks? I think? Hehe *hugs*
Date: 06/06/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty
ohhh. ya. i can totally see where she is coming from. it looks like they both have growing up to do. doesnt make it any easier though. great job. i could really see it playing out with their emotions.
Author's Response: Thanks Mary! I'm glad you liked it, you're right about the fact that they both need to grow up. I suppose it just wasn't meant to be at the time being.
Date: 06/06/08 04:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty
oooo. that Chris better run! Don't worry Nick, I'll get him for ya, you focus on your woman! I feel for poor Nick. But I can see where Camille is coming from. How is she to know if his heart is in it? I hope everything gets sorted out soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Kristal! I feel sorry for Nick too, but if he hadn't acted like such a prick earlier on this really wouldn't be happening. I guess he's still got some growing up to do. Ditto for Camille, if she hadn't been so stubborn things could have been sorted out earlier. Guess we'll have to see what the future holds, eh?
Date: 06/06/08 04:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Aww Steph... That's just wow. I dunno what to say. On one hand I want it to work out for them, but Cam is sort of right in a way. Too much damage has been done and I think Nick asking her to marry him only made things worse instead of better. I guess this isn't going to have a happy ending, which is okay. I know a lot of readers will bitch and complain and give you crap, but its realistic.
I think Chris got off REALLY easy the lil bitch... I was like Oh yea you better run you prick! LOL
Author's Response: Thanks Mel! Yeah.. there was no way it could have been a perfectly happy ending with all the shit that happened. Yeah, Chris really did get off easy... but I think losing his two closest friends is punishment enough without getting beaten into the ground. (Though it would have been fun to write!) Nick's proposal really did make things worse, he was far too desparate and it was a bad attempt at getting her back. I'm glad she saw through it though.
Date: 06/06/08 12:08 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Oooh this is getting good Steph! I knew that Chris was into her! And he's obviously looking to get laid. Titantic AND Pearl Harbor? Why didn't he just go rent The Notebook while he was at it too? LOL
Something tells me though that Nick is making a mistake in proposing to her like this. I think he's only doing it to appease her which isn't healthy, He does get points for Tiffany's though. He obviously does understand the power of blue box LOL
Author's Response: LOL No kidding eh? I was trying to think of the sappiest girliest movies. Nick is acting completely irrational, which will lead to tons of fun drama. I adore Tiffany's, one day I'll get something from there haha. Thanks muchly Mel! *muah*
Date: 06/05/08 11:34 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
nick is so going to walk in on her and chris and be fummmmmmmmming! haha cant wait for more! let the drama unfold!
Author's Response: The drama will definitely unfold, and it will be excellent. *rubs hands together* muhahaha! Thanks Mary!
Date: 06/05/08 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
SQUEEEEEEEEEE! *jumps on your back and hugs you to death* I'm so excited! *bakes you a gigantic cake*
Author's Response: LOL Yay! I hope I'm forgiven for the filler chapters now!
Date: 06/05/08 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
what you've got cooking? is it an AJ story? *hopeful grin* hurry up already, then, I wanna know the surprise!!!!!!! *jumps around excitedly*
Author's Response: Yes it's an AJ story :) LOL Kristal you're too adorable
Date: 06/05/08 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
*gasp* I hate it when you do this to me. you best be planning to update again soon, missy pants! and it best not be a damn filler chapter either!
Author's Response: LOL I advanced the plot! I told you about Nick's plan! Chris acted like a douche! Jeez Kristal! LOL :P don't worry, next chapter is full of juicy drama, I promise you'll love it! Thanks for the feedback hun! Oh, and I think you'll be pleasantly surprised with what I have cooking for my next story after this one is done ;)
Date: 06/05/08 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Don't they say that the best laid plans always fail? I can't wait for the next chapter....Chris is trying to work his mojo on her. Who needs enemies when you have a best friend like that!!! Great job, bebe! Update soon!
Author's Response: Haha Chris is definitely trying to work his mojo on her. If everything went according to plan that would be boring! Thanks for the feedback girlie! :)
Date: 06/05/08 08:43 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Well, I bet the next chapter is going to be interesting, with Nick droping by to propose and Chris with her in the house,please update soon,lol. Take Care!
Author's Response: The next chapter is going to be VERY interesting! I'll try to update ASAP :) Thanks Yara!
