Date: 06/05/08 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Nick u better get moving be4 that so called friend of yours does something x
Author's Response: He damn well better LOL Thanks ALM!
Date: 06/05/08 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Oh hell no! You did not just leave it like that? Okay...it's official! I'm gonna cyber kill you! LMAO! Great chapter...Nick better get to Camille before Chris does. *Dramatic soap opera music*
Author's Response: lmao Thanks Rachel! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Chris might still have another trick or two up his sleeve!
Date: 06/05/08 05:29 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Well Chris is definetly starting to annoy me, in fact I don't like him that much,lol. I also feel Nicks decision wasn't a good one, but lets wait and see. Please update soon; Take Care!
Author's Response: Nothing about this situation is good, is it? It should be interesting to see how it all plays out. Thanks for your feedback, Yara!
Date: 06/05/08 12:53 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Holy shit... Nick's going to propose? He really is irrational lol But I couldn't help but go "awww" a little bit. I dunno though, it's a little weird. Is he doing it just to get her back or does he REALLY want to marry her? I mean, to even go through with this shows that he really wants to be with her, but I hope he doesn't regret it. I wonder how Camille is going to take this? lol I can't wait to see! I can't imagine she'll be too pleased. She'll probably think it's a joke. And Chris... ugh... I want to punch him in the face. Part of this whole ordeal is his fault! I can't wait to see what's next! I love your writing my love. It drags me in every single time, it's awesome.
Author's Response: Muhahaha drama galore! Nick is super irrational! I mean, I guess it's a sweet gesture, and if anything you're right, it really does show how much he cares for her, that he's willing to go that far... but who knows? We'll have to see what Camille's response is, won't we? That should be fun! Chris is crafty, isn't he? What a dink lol. Thanks muchly for all your feedback, Dani! I'm so glad you like my writing :) That makes me a happy panda! *muah*
Date: 06/05/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Awwwwww, I'm glad we finally get to see a little of their past and how they met. We never really got to see them in happy times so these flashbacks were definitely nice, though evil. It's sad what's happened to them, seriously. He seemed to adore her and then things just got a little too routine and stressed for them and it kind of died down. Gah! I want these two to work things out! I really enjoyed this chapter. The flashbacks were awesome and sweet :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the flashbacks! I thought they were necessary because as you said, we never really saw them when they were happy. We needed to know why they loved each other in the first place, you know? Also, I needed filler! :P Thanks hun!
Date: 06/05/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Camille is so fucking stubborn. She's way too strong lol I know that sounds weird, but seriously. If it were me, I would have read that email, and if it were me, I'd get advice from my friends, but I don't know if I would really listen to them to that extent, especially so early on in their breakup. Maybe I'm weak, I dunno. I'm starting to feel bad for Nick. He really is trying, and Camille is giving him nothing back. She should at least TALK to him to clear some things up. And Chris is really pissing me off. Being Nick's "best friend" and all, he should be more willing to help him out, or at least tell him what the hell is going on. Jeez, what a sticky situation. I want Christmas to come so I can see what happens!
Author's Response: You're not weak... I totally would have picked up on the first ring when Nick called haha. I just needed her to be strong for a plot device :P Plus she's pretty peeved.. so yeah. Chris is a horrible best friend... I mean, with friends like that, who needs enemies right? At least nick's trying a little harder now.. too bad it might be too late. Thanks again Dani!
Date: 06/05/08 12:22 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
I adored this chapter. I think it might be my fav so far of the story. I loved how you started out with the email, I loved how you went into Nick's confusion/panic state, and then ended with Camille. It's all so incredibly sad, but it was bound to happen. So much has gone wrong for these two and it's a shame. A lot of it is a misunderstanding, a lot of it is miscommunication, and dammit, I wish she would have just picked up the phone to talk to him. He better keep trying to call her. If he gives up on her, then he must not have really loved her. I really loved this chapter! It was wonderful writing Steph :) You're doing a great job with this story.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter, because I was really proud of the way that it turned out. LOL As Mel said, art imitating life much? Haha. But yeah.. there were way too many problems in their relationship for it to keep going on the way it was. They really need to communicate with each other more, because if they'd been calling each other regularly the misunderstanding wouldn't have happened. Thanks Dani! :)
Date: 06/05/08 12:14 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I still want to kill Chris. I wish he would just tell her! Jesus. He sees how upset she is, it would totally help if he just let her know that Nick had called. I can't really blame her for wanting to break up with Nick. There's only so much emotional drama you can take before you just want to give up, no matter how much you love someone. I'm all stressed out here Steph lol I love this story.
But dammit, Nick is being a hypocrit. Now he's all bent out of shape because Camille won't call him, but for the longest time he wouldn't call her. It's about time he gets a taste of his own medicine, but still, he should just pick up the phone and call her again. If he misses her so much, he shouldn't just sit there and wait. Fkdalfkdafkdaofk;! GAH! Frustration!
Great chap :)
Author's Response: I know, right? Camille and Nick are both just too stubborn for their own good. If one of them would just pick up the damn phone, their whole problem would be solved. Granted, the one missed call isn't their only issue, but it's definitely allowing a lot of their insecurities to surface. Nick is totally acting like an immature child. Guess we'll have to see what happens ;) Thanks hun! I love your awesome reviews hehe.
Date: 06/05/08 12:06 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh. My. God. I want to kill Chris. What the fuck is he thinking? That's the stupidest thing ever. Sure, Camille was finally letting loose to have fun but that gives him no excuse to delete Nick's call and to not tell her. What an ass! I'm so pissed off. And Nick's response with the club and the girl? He's so irrational. That makes me nervous for what's coming next. When Cam doesn't call him back, what's he going to do? Ugh, the drama... I LOVE IT!
Oh, and I love this line: "Especially since it seemed to cause her more stress and anguish in analyzing what he'd said, and how he'd said it, just like every other time they'd talked."
Sounds just like me. I overanalyze everything... it's like, did he mean this, or that? Well, he said it with this tone of voice, so did he mean that? Or maybe... lmao It sucks. I wish us girls didn't do that. It would make things so much more easier.
Author's Response: Nick and Chris are both acting like morons in their own little ways. Chris really pulled a major stunt here that wasn't cool at all. But it'll definitely cause some drama, and that's always fun! I'm just like you Dani, I totally analyze and analyze and analyze some more. It's no fun... but it makes for some good girl talk! lol thanks for the review! *muah*
Date: 06/04/08 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh lord, I can just imagine Camille's elation over Nick calling her. I know exactly how it feels to be so insecure and unsure in a relationship, have the guy not call you though things are supposed to be "okay" and when he does call you, there's like this wave of relief that spreads over you. I'm glad he called her but I hate that he did it because he got upset with the guys over their relationship. He should be calling her ass every chance he gets. Why is it so hard for guys to pick up the phone? Bitches!
Poor Cam though. She's really taking this whole distance thing pretty hard, but you know, it wouldn't be so bad if Nick wasn't be a douchebag about it. If he were only more attentive... but why isn't he? He's still confusing me!
GAH! I loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Yes I HATE that feeling of insecurity over a guy not calling, GAH! I totally feel her pain. Nick's reason behind calling her was pretty...ergh. I mean, he should have wanted to, not just have done it out of anger at the others. But who knows? Nickers works in mysterious ways. He really should be trying to make this easier on her, instead he's making it ten times harder. Thanks for your feedback hun!
Date: 06/04/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Steph, I'm a douchebag! I haven't been on here in ages and I'm so very sorry. I thought summer would be more relaxing but I barely have any time to myself. This is my first day off in 7 days so I decided to catch up... FINALLY! I'm sorry!
But holy cow, I don't understand Nick. How can he be that unaffected by the entire situation? I know he's excited to get back to work, to start touring, to hang out with the guys, but jeez, if he's so in love with Camille, he should be freaking out a little right now, so when she called him and he just wanted to go back to the table... what the fuck? Poor Cam. She has every right in the world to be worrying about 'Backstreet Boy' Nick. I don't have a very good feeling for the outcome of these two. Damn Nick! Great chapter girlie. I'm running off to read the next one :)
Author's Response: Awww yay Dani! I'm glad you're back! I just figured you were really busy with work and friends and stuff. I was considering coming to Colorado and being all "Dani!!! I miss you!" But I figured that might be extreme. lol. Nick makes no sense, eh? I mean.. yay for starting a new CD and everything but honestly, he should be giving Camille more attention. Especially after the way he acted on their last night together. He's a total lamer... as you'll see very soon :) You came back just in time, this one is just about to wrap up, wooo! Thanks mucho for your feedback girlie, glad to see you're having a productive summer!!
Date: 06/04/08 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
somehow i'm not surprised to hear Chris's confession...Can't he see that her and Nick belong together? jeez..i understand his intensions, but he's really not being a friend to either of them...Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Nope, not surprising in the least is it? He's acting pretty lame, it'll be interesting to see what happens once Nick and Camille find out the games he's been playing. Thanks Nikki! :)
Date: 06/04/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
oh rash rash nick. haha that proposal should be interesting.
Author's Response: I am so excited to write it! Thanks for the feedback, mary!
Date: 06/04/08 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh, snap! Nick better get to her before Chris does! Damn him!
Author's Response: LOL I love how everyone hates Chris so much, it's highly amusing. Thanks Rachel! *muah*
Date: 06/04/08 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
that Chris is really making me mad if it was not for him breaking them up she would not be so sad x When they find out i really hope Nick give him a really good kicking x
Author's Response: Aww ALM you have such passion for my characters, I love it! Hopefully Nick will set things straight! Thanks for your feedback :)
