Date: 06/04/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I can not wait for the next chapter...to see what Nick does with the ring. Men are so funny, do they seriously think diamonds can just blind us? More more more! Great job, bebe!
Author's Response: LOL I know right? Silly boys! It should be an interesting turn of events. Thanks for your feedback hun!
Date: 06/03/08 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Aww man I just wanna throttle Chris! It's SOOOO frustrating how just by chance they keep missing their chance to talk things out. I do think that Cam at least owes it to at least listen to what Nick has to say if for nothing else but closures sake. Nice work Steph! Hopefully this helps your writers block!
Author's Response: I agree with the throttling of Chris lol. Camille definitely needs to listen to Nick, you're right about that. Thanks for your feedback, Mel! Maybe now I can try to churn out the next chapter :)
Date: 06/03/08 02:23 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Really do hope at same point they talk about things without third party x I know Chris did not come into this chapter but would love find out why he doing this esp if both Nick and Camille find out what he did he gonna to loss both of them
Author's Response: Hopefully they will get the chance to talk without Chris interfering. We'll see a bit more of Chris and his motives in coming chapters. Thanks ALM!
Date: 06/03/08 03:41 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Good chapter. Hope she gives him a chance to explain himself and maybe safe their relationship or what is left of it. Hope to read another chapter soon. Take Care!!
Author's Response: Thanks! There might still be hope if they end up talking to each other, we'll see :)
Date: 06/02/08 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Awww they miss each other. It's true what they say...you never know what you have until it's gone. :O)
Author's Response: Very true! Thanks for your feedback :)
Date: 06/02/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Paused is the perfect word to describe their relationship!!!
I love the flashbacks, they give some insight into why they cared for each other and help to establish why they are both invested in the relationship and why this is so hard for both of them. Great job, bebe!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter :) You were right, it really did help gain some more perspective on the characters.. plus it provided for some filler haha. Thanks hun!
Date: 06/02/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
okay...first I squeeled when I saw the update...then I read the update...and then I was like "UGH!" becuase nothing HAPPENED in the update! damn you and your flashback sorta shit. lol.
I wanted to find out if and how he gets a hold of her...how he makes things better...ANYTHING! But noooooooooo. you just gotta beat around the bush about it! well hmph! *stick tongue out* maybe the chap I'm getting ready to write for LATB will be all beating around the bush and no getting anywhere!
You know I love ya, tho! I am still super anxious to see what happens. I hope you'll update again soon! *muuuuuuah*
Author's Response: Aww I'm sorry about that Kristal, lol. Don't worry, I promise that the climax is going to be epic! The flashbacks were kind of necessary though, because we needed to see that at one point things were good between them. LOL I totally know how it is though, I'll try to get a new chapter up ASAP! And beating around the bush on LATB? Nooo! LOL! See how much of a hypocrite I am? :P Thanks for your enthusiastic feedback, girlie! *hugs*
Date: 05/31/08 02:49 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Please update soon, hopefully nick will find out what chris is up to.
Author's Response: I'll try to post an update tomorrow :) Thanks for the review, Kim!
Date: 05/30/08 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Six
loved it
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your feedback, girlie :)
Date: 05/30/08 07:23 pm Title: Chapter Five
i smell more drama. hehe
Date: 05/30/08 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Four
oh my so good
Date: 05/30/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter Three
oh my great job.
Date: 05/30/08 08:49 am Title: Chapter Two
awsome chapter
Date: 05/30/08 04:53 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Nick, don't be blind; Chris wants Camille for himself. Hope they get to talk soon. Can't wait to read another chapter. Take Care!
Author's Response: Nick really does have a lot of faith in Chris, doesn't he? Thanks for your feedback, Yara!
Date: 05/30/08 01:50 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Like sand through the hour glass...these are the days of our lives. LMAO! Great chapter, girlie! I want more! :O)
Author's Response: Haha! Drama drama drama, eh? Glad you liked it :) I'll try to post an update sometime today!
