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Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/08 03:10 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Setting us up for some drama, I see. Lurve it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Yes indeed, drama is on the way! Thanks for the review girlie! *hugs*

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/08 06:41 am Title: Chapter Ten

Man, I just noticed you had another chapter up! I'm slow on the uptake lately aren't I? And dude, if I were Camille, I would have been livid with Chris. Who says that? Honestly! What a way to cheer a girl up. Guys don't have the social skills to deal with situations like this, I swear. That really ticked me off. It's like he secretly really wants Nick to fuck up so he can have a go with Camille. I guess we'll see eh? And Nick wouldn't sleep with her again? Good lord, he must be going through a dry spell or something. It's strange how he's not beat up about leaving her like that, and I can't blame her for becoming so silent. It's not like her begging or arguing or causing a scene did anything for her in the past month or so, so why do it then? I think she just came to realize that it was inevitable and there was no use fighting it. She just gave up, which is sad, but understandable.

This was a great chap! I hope you're having fun at your convention, just not too much ;) lol I can't wait to see more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks Dani! My convention was fun, but after four days of it I was glad it was over lol. Chris was kind of a jerk to Camille. He's being really passive aggressive, and it's irritating. You're right, it really does seem like he's trying to make Camille have second thoughts about Nick. Nick is really being like, the anti-sex, isn't he? lol! You're right, there was no point in her begging him to stay or anything, she really did give up on that. It is kind of sad, but at least she's sort of accepting the situation as it is. Thanks for your feedback, Dani! Hopefully I can update soon, but I have crazy writers block for some reason. *muah*

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 02:48 am Title: Chapter Ten

Way to make a girl feel better Chris? Telling her that Nick is prolly going to break up with her so he can be free to do groupies while he's on tour? Ok... So I twisted his words slightly LOl But being female I know how that's how it had to have sounded to Cam. I'm wondering if Chris REALLY does have the hots for her. He seems to be inadveretantly sabotaging their relationship. This is going to get interesting! Loved it Steph!

Author's Response: Oh, Camille definitely took that in a much worse way than Chris intended. I'm pretty sure he's just trying to help, but he's not really going about it well. Or, who knows? He could be trying to stir up some drama. We'll have to wait and see! Thanks Mel! :)

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 01:00 am Title: Chapter Ten

Nick kind of acted lke the girl in that situation. He didn't want to be with her in fear Chris heard them? That's kind of lame,poor Camille.

Author's Response: lmao Nick definitely had a lame reason for not wanting to sleep with her. Thanks a bunch, Yara!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 12:53 am Title: Chapter Nine

Ohhh, that's bad; no goodbaye sex. lol.

Author's Response: lmao yeah, no goodbye sex definitely sucks!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 12:48 am Title: Chapter Eight

Yeah, get comfortable. Cause theire both so stubborn I doubt he gives in, or her for that matter. Take Care!

Author's Response: They're both incredibly stubborn! It's going to be difficult for them to come to a compromise. Thanks for your feedback :)

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 12:41 am Title: Chapter Seven

Well, that's a start, I guess. Hopefully their relationship will get better instead of going backwards all the time. Take Care!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I figured they needed kind of a tender moment in there

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 12:26 am Title: Chapter Six

I wonder how that conversation is going to end. Hope they can make something work.

Author's Response: Yeah, we'll have to see!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/08 12:16 am Title: Chapter Five

I think they should just call it quit, I mean all they ever do is fight. I know they love eachother, but maybe it'll be for the best.

Author's Response: They do love each other, they're just going through a hard time. Hopefully they can make it through! Thanks!

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Ten

ooh chris. hes just making little jabs here and there instigating. hmm. and go you with all these updates! : )

Author's Response: Yeah, Chris is really being quite crafty hehe. Thanks mary! :)

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Ten

*sigh* why you gotta just leave it there? and what was Chris thinking? I mean, I can understand but he shouldn't have told her RIGHT after Nick left. he should have given her a little bit of time to get used to him being gone. *rolls eyes*

Author's Response: Yeah, Chris really should have waited until the initial shock had subsided to offer his insight. Thanks Kristal! :)

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Ten

I can't believe they didn't have a "proper" goodbye...things were left very very oddly between the two of them. I totally agree that when someone is nonverbal, it is almost worse than them saying what they are thinking - too much is left for interpretation. I am interested in reading more and seeing what happens! SUPER DUPER!!!

Author's Response: Yeah it sucks that things had to be left that way between them. But, it will make for some interesting drama, and this is always a good thing! LOL! Thanks for reading girlie :) *hugs*

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter Four

Jum, maybe she can stay with Chris. I feel like he could paly an important role in this story, not just the best friend. Well, I'll keep reading to find out.

Author's Response: Staying with Chris might be an option! You're right, he's for sure an important character in the story. Thanks for all your feedback, Yara! :)

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 08:08 am Title: Chapter Three

Chris is the mediator here. I assume she won't be happy at all about moving. Let's see what happens.

Author's Response: Oh she's definitely not going to be happy lol. Good thing they've sort of got Chris in the middle... for now ;)

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/08 08:00 am Title: Chapter Two

That's what she should do, talk to him instead of pushing him away.

Author's Response: They definitely have a lack of communication going on, that's for sure!