Date: 06/09/08 05:39 am Title: Chapter 14
They really like eachpther, cute, and they seem like they could be a great couple. Take Care!
Author's Response: Yes, so far their developement has become a good thing.
Date: 06/09/08 05:28 am Title: Chapter 13
Nice way to pick up a lady Kev,lol. Nice chapter. Take Care!
Author's Response: LMAO! Yeah, he was smooth, eh?
Date: 06/09/08 05:18 am Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter, they're starting to be more comfortable around eachother. Just a quick question, in what year is this story taken place? I'm a little confused,lol. Great story.
Author's Response: This story takes place in 1999 right before the Milennium tour.
Date: 06/08/08 06:44 am Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter. Hope she opens up and confides in him.
Author's Response: I hope so too. :O) We'll have to wait and see what happens.
Date: 06/08/08 06:27 am Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. That part when Nick said he didn't live alone I thought he was going to say he lived with his dogs or something, not his wholee family,it confused me for a minute,lol. Take Care!
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, I can see how that would be. :O)
Date: 06/08/08 06:16 am Title: Chapter 9
Aj is such a good friend. Nick seems to like her, so lets see what happens between those two.
Author's Response: Yes, A.J. is the reason these two get together. LOL!
Date: 06/08/08 01:53 am Title: Chapter 13
darn that was scary but right out the fairy tales how she was about to fall off and he catching her...great update I just Kevin take the chance.
And what is going with nikki is she scare or something ??? I think they like eachother more than they know but they have never said anything...I hope that change soon because I might come in Howie's life and steal him from her :-P Like Stealling Cinderella;) lol!
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, Kevin should take a chance on Sarah. He's ready for love and she fell into his arm, literally. LOL! As for Nikki and Howie...hmm...maybe their time together as life long friends turned into love a long time ago. We'll have to wait and see. :O)
Date: 06/08/08 01:21 am Title: Chapter 12
I knew something would happen with the silibings...its so typical but so good...great update I'm loving reading the story like this...with chapters back to back:D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :O) I've got a crap load to update tonight. I'm on a roll!
Date: 06/08/08 01:13 am Title: Chapter 11
What is going on with Rachel is more to her asthma that we know huh?
Author's Response: Yup, there is a lot more than she's letting on. She's about to have a rude awakening to her health very soon.
Date: 06/08/08 01:04 am Title: Chapter 10
'Brian was standing behind them. He fluttered his eyelashes. "I just can't seem to do anything with my hair. Can you fix it for me?" he said with a laugh. Rachel elbowed him in the ribs. "Ouch! Watch it!" he said as he rubbed his ribs.' that was hilirious....
That was good and cute how he gave her the rose...I just hope the movie date dont turn out to be a date from hell because of his family...they are chaotic lol!
Author's Response: LMAO! I had to make Brian a goofball. It's his nature. :O) As for Nick and Kristin's movie date, you'll have to read to find out. ;o)
Date: 06/08/08 12:52 am Title: Chapter 9
its great I hope Nicks get the corauge to do it or he'll be hearing aj as long as thry live lol! Hey you finally answer to my feedback, I thought you didn't like me lol!
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, Nick acts like such a pimp, but it's obvious when he's smitten by a girl, he's a little insecure.
Date: 06/07/08 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
Kristen and Rachel sure seem to be living a dream life here, but the pessimisst inside me makes me think that something is going to happen to make it less perfect. I mean come on everything seems to have worked out WAAAY too perfectly so far.
Pretty ironic that Rachel and Brian both have heart conditions. Guess its a match made in heaven or something. Brian's reacton to Rachel's sudden tearburst surprised me. Most guys I know would run for the hills if a girl they barely knew just started crying after their first date.
Author's Response: You are right about that. Things will start rocking very quickly.rnrnYes, they both have heart conditions, but as the story goes along, you'll see why Brian and Rachel were brought into each other's lives. This is only part one of the series. There's soooo much more to come! As for him being there when she cried, it's his sensitive side coming out. Brian will become someone very important to her, she just doesn't realize it yet.
Date: 06/07/08 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow i really like this story keep up the good work! i can't wait to see what happens but i'm vey curious to know Rachels relationship wih her mom very inteesting.
Author's Response: Yes, more details of her relationship with her mother will be revealed as the story moves along! :O) Thanks for reading! A lot more will be updated tonight!
Date: 06/07/08 06:29 am Title: Chapter 8
Nice chapter. Wonder what's wrong with Nick. Is he nervous cause he likes her? jum, it could be. Hope to read more soon. Take Care!
Author's Response: Nick's in an awkward stage in his life. Remember, he's 19 and this is when his life really started to take off. You'll see him grow as the story goes along.
Date: 06/07/08 02:31 am Title: Chapter 8
Poor Rachel but you what they say its better be alone and ok and have somebuging the life out of you lol! I cannot wait for more...Maybe some Howie action here lol!
Author's Response: LOL! This is true, Rachel will soon see how her mother is not a good person in her life. LOL! More Howie action very soon.
