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Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 05:41 am Title: Chapter 4

Ouch...Brian was a little harsh, but Rachel handled him with class...can't wait to see what happens next...

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

The more I read, the more I like Rachel. It's obvious she's just looking to have a platonic relationship with someone who understands her. I was pretty annoyed with Brian in this chapter. Hoping Nick gets an STD? Yeah, that's real mature buddy. Yeesh! Kudos to Rachel for keeping her composure though, and I loved her little comment to AJ and Brian later on! Great chapter, Kelly!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/08 07:59 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad Kevin was impressed finally! And Howie - good, old, silent Howie - lol. He cracks me up! :)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. really glad they're gonna be friends!!!! I'm jealous! Lol. 



Author's Response: hey! He at least said something in this chapter! And to be fair AJ Kevin both only had like one line in this chapter too.